TheDarkDemon

Just gotta say your one punch collab entry is my favorite from the collab :D

Fuel wrote:Just gotta say your one punch collab entry is my favorite from the collab :D

Yours too. It feels like just yesterday it was released.

I'm still alive. Are you still alive?

Why are you in the Beginner's hall?

PivotYoungster wrote:Why are you in the Beginner's hall?

I agree, your animations are epic man.

PivotYoungster wrote:Why are you in the Beginner's hall?

cus staff haven't moved him up yet lmao y does everyone ask this


the animation is good gatashu ( ° ͜ʖ °) continue it ( ° ͜ʖ °)

PivotYoungster wrote:Why are you in the Beginner's hall?

I'm basically the mold on your bathroom walls that you can't get rid of.

Hey Gatashu! Didnt knew you were here! This is awesome, keep it up!
Id say you are like, midway to interz, but I am bad at ranking so dont expect much : P

You need to do a bit more of fight, your anims usually arent of that, you focus more on the recovery from it, and that if well animated is awesome but if there isnt a lot of combos well it looks a bit weird. Basically you should animate more combos and more frames of two people fighting, but everything else is really cool! : D

Xonar26 wrote:Hey Gatashu! Didnt knew you were here! This is awesome, keep it up!
Id say you are like, midway to interz, but I am bad at ranking so dont expect much : P

You need to do a bit more of fight, your anims usually arent of that, you focus more on the recovery from it, and that if well animated is awesome but if there isnt a lot of combos well it looks a bit weird. Basically you should animate more combos and more frames of two people fighting, but everything else is really cool! : D

That's good advice, thanks man

New update with a few new animations. Also, if you were to rank me what would you say?

aye, you'll get back into it in no time. Just do what you're doing dude.

Update! Two new animations with more to come.
New animations are in the spoiler.

I've been enjoying your style since I saw your One Punch Collab entry.

The first new animation feels very dynamic with the multi layered background and you did a good job animating the grass/dust trails from his feet. But if you're going to make the clouds stationary when the camera isn't moving, then the clouds should move in the same direction as the land during the scene where he's running. The way you have it now insinuates that the clouds are moving to the right even when the camera is stationary, but looking at your stationary shots the clouds don't move at all. Like after the guy stops sliding on the ground the clouds completely stop. You could fix this by continuing to move the clouds to the right, just slow them down a little since the camera stops moving. I mean it's not something that sticks out that much, since people's eyes are focusing on the movement of the clouds in general and not so much which way they should be moving, but it bothered me so I wanted to point it out.

The second one has some nice angles and effects. That seems to be where you excel. I can't really find anything to criticize on this one. I guess you could have tried giving the figures an idle animation in the beginning instead of making them static, but that's not really a flaw.

Overall i really like your animations. They're packed full of action, effects, and zoomed out shots of explosions. Generally there is just a lot of energy in them. You'll probably get moved up to intermediate soon.

YO GATA! I'm Fenix! From youtube! These anims are sick, had never seen them before. I can't really see anything wrong about them, only what Raymond said, so see you in interz :P

Raymond wrote:I've been enjoying your style since I saw your One Punch Collab entry.

The first new animation feels very dynamic with the multi layered background and you did a good job animating the grass/dust trails from his feet. But if you're going to make the clouds stationary when the camera isn't moving, then the clouds should move in the same direction as the land during the scene where he's running. The way you have it now insinuates that the clouds are moving to the right even when the camera is stationary, but looking at your stationary shots the clouds don't move at all. Like after the guy stops sliding on the ground the clouds completely stop. You could fix this by continuing to move the clouds to the right, just slow them down a little since the camera stops moving. I mean it's not something that sticks out that much, since people's eyes are focusing on the movement of the clouds in general and not so much which way they should be moving, but it bothered me so I wanted to point it out.

The second one has some nice angles and effects. That seems to be where you excel. I can't really find anything to criticize on this one. I guess you could have tried giving the figures an idle animation in the beginning instead of making them static, but that's not really a flaw.

Overall i really like your animations. They're packed full of action, effects, and zoomed out shots of explosions. Generally there is just a lot of energy in them. You'll probably get moved up to intermediate soon.

I was going for a counter-clockwise effect with the stickman running at an angle. But yeah, next time I'll do what you said because it looks better regardless. Thanks Raymond

Fenix wrote:YO GATA! I'm Fenix! From youtube! These anims are sick, had never seen them before. I can't really see anything wrong about them, only what Raymond said, so see you in interz :P

Hey Fenix! I didn't know you were on here too. Most of these animations were in the 200 subscriber pivot montage video. Sadly, the quality of those animations were ruined by the export settings of camtasia. Thanks man