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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Gun-Kata/Combo Generator

Postby XElite109 » Thu Apr 14, 2016 9:02 pm

This is nice but feels very powerless in terms of his attacks. It feels more like the white guy is dodging the hits instead of actually getting hit. I think because he's being hit by guns and just seems to be flowing with the gun instead of doing a thud with his head.I also think that after the second hit he should try to block the combo with his arms.
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Gun-Kata/Combo Generator

Postby The Black Mamba » Thu Apr 21, 2016 10:14 pm

Crispy combo man, I love the finish with the gun. You should do more combo oriented stuff, you're pretty good at it.
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Gun-Kata/Combo Generator

Postby Hitman » Mon May 02, 2016 1:47 pm

Wheres the combo generator
RS is kinda dead now huh?,and so am I.



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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Gun-Kata/Combo Generator

Postby Alexis » Tue May 03, 2016 6:23 am

darkhitman345 wrote:Wheres the combo generator


No idea, ask crafty
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Gun-Kata/Combo Generator

Postby Leo » Tue May 03, 2016 6:52 am

UnusAngelusAlatum wrote:
darkhitman345 wrote:Wheres the combo generator


No idea, ask crafty

If you guys didn't notice it, is in the 1st page.
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Gun-Kata/Combo Generator

Postby Alexis » Tue May 03, 2016 7:02 am

Leo wrote:
UnusAngelusAlatum wrote:
darkhitman345 wrote:Wheres the combo generator


No idea, ask crafty

If you guys didn't notice it, is in the 1st page.


here it is pal

https://pivotanimation.org/generator/

its p simple atm, but sooner itll become the combo generator of combo generators.
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Obstacle Course

Postby Mr. Grape Soda » Sat Jun 25, 2016 7:44 pm

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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Obstacle Course

Postby XElite109 » Sat Jun 25, 2016 8:17 pm

im loving the subtle details man the run to the balloon felt really fast but other then that it looks nice. i like the climb and fall
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Obstacle Course

Postby Jojishi » Sat Jun 25, 2016 10:46 pm

That was excellent Grape. I think this has some of your best movements yet. What I really liked about it was the spacing and the fore-shortening of the limbs in places. It helps it feel realistic and have depth, but you also kept it all proportionate.

There were sudden stops in spacing though, which I think could have been a bit better. At the beginning he falls, but recovers and struggles back up between the two walls. At this part, when he catches himself it maybe stops a bit suddenly. I think if he slid more before stopping it might have looked better.

Also the landing at the end seemed a little stop and go, especially for a fall that big. Otherwise, it seems okay and I still think it is fine.

Overall, a very good animation. Things that stuck out to me were the spacing (which was good for the most part), poses, physics, fore-shortening, anticipation and just how interesting it was to watch in general. I really liked this. :)
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Obstacle Course

Postby Pop » Mon Jun 27, 2016 11:53 am

Really Good stuff! I don't have any Useful CC so its pretty great.
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Update

Postby Mr. Grape Soda » Thu Jul 21, 2016 7:01 pm

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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Update

Postby Tops620 » Fri Jul 22, 2016 12:11 am

woah, great stuff dude! i really liked the last animation, looks epic.
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Update

Postby Sharpshooter » Fri Jul 22, 2016 5:31 am

Nice update mate (thumbsup

You have some of the best heavy spacing on this forum, and you're able to keep each movement fluid, too. Impressive. The pistol whipping animation was my favourite, a very creative way of using a gun.
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Update

Postby Blademaster » Sat Jul 23, 2016 5:09 am

I enjoyed it so much, as I already told you man. great job man :) (thumbsup

you're already veteran for me ^^
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Re: Mr. Grape's Thread - Update

Postby Amir » Sat Jul 23, 2016 4:26 pm

I really like this type of animations, great work man!
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