by Jojishi » Sat Jun 25, 2016 10:46 pm
That was excellent Grape. I think this has some of your best movements yet. What I really liked about it was the spacing and the fore-shortening of the limbs in places. It helps it feel realistic and have depth, but you also kept it all proportionate.
There were sudden stops in spacing though, which I think could have been a bit better. At the beginning he falls, but recovers and struggles back up between the two walls. At this part, when he catches himself it maybe stops a bit suddenly. I think if he slid more before stopping it might have looked better.
Also the landing at the end seemed a little stop and go, especially for a fall that big. Otherwise, it seems okay and I still think it is fine.
Overall, a very good animation. Things that stuck out to me were the spacing (which was good for the most part), poses, physics, fore-shortening, anticipation and just how interesting it was to watch in general. I really liked this. :)