TheDarkDemon

oooh those are neat dude.
you certainly improved. Your animations are really clean and smooth in most parts.

Anyways, I am not such a big fan of your combos. I've already told you something about that on discord.
Dont pull back the arms/feet right away when you just extended them.
Also to show off more power, it'd be helpful if he'd do a strong pose which kinda describes that he charged the attack.
Holding poses, adding anticipation. Try that.


Also try to avoid ending your animation in a pose like this:



I'd say you're on a good direction towards intermediate. maybe do some long animation idk

yes sir!
i will add some anticipations and power poses! thx u

NEW! a short animation who i try to make good spacing!

it's not good if i not pullback the arm, that make not strong...

Echo gave some good advice there.

This animation still looked Inters (to me, but maybe I've gone soft), even with the minor flaws. The poses were good and the spacing/flow was animated beautifully. There's power in those attacks as well.

I can see you getting moved up in the near future. Just keep at it. :)

Jojishi wrote:I can see you getting moved up in the near future. Just keep at it. :)

You improved greatly since the last time you asked me. But some of the actions in your animations aren't flowing right together. Too quick of weight shifting for a realistic connection of action to action. Needs more inertia for after each action. But still, I'd say you're at very near if not at intermediate.

Nice Kuro thing there:

maybe not, but still, eh.

Anyways, I kinda like your spacing here. It's smooth and all that. But I feel that you need to improve your timing on your attacks since they're very monotonous and there's no variation to it. Try maybe adding quick attacks then followed by medium and then hard attacks or something.

As for your poses, I feel like your previous animations have better ones since the attacks on these are pretty much unbalanced and that first punch lacked anticipation and the pose wasn't very balanced to be able to express power. The rest of the attacks' power came from the upper body instead of the rest of the body which made it look very uncomfortable to watch.


This is what I'm talking about. now I really like this animation of yours since the poses are very balanced even though most of the attacks lack any sort of power.

thank's you all, yeah, i'm a fan of kuro, he have a good style, i'm influenced.
i really try to make good spacing but i try to make a speed difference, and it's not easy.
this animation you disliked is'nt my favourite too, i hesitate to upload it.
i need to learn anticipation , thx u for your reply all! :D

MrZenox wrote:thank's you all, yeah, i'm a fan of kuro, he have a good style, i'm influenced.
i really try to make good spacing but i try to make a speed difference, and it's not easy.
this animation you disliked is'nt my favourite too, i hesitate to upload it.
i need to learn anticipation , thx u for your reply all! :D

Nah that was actually my FAVORITE animation of yours hahaha!

wow dude youre definitely inters to me, your last animation looked really clean and powerful, the second punch was so fast and i love that style, keep it up!!

thx you :)
i'm enjoying to know someone is loving my style ^^
it's a motivation for me :D
in the same time, UPDATE

Congrats, you're Intermediate now. :)

You completely deserved it too, since the newest animation is absolutely amazing. The 3D angles are spectacular.

Yep congrats my dude. It took a while definitely, but welcome to intermediate.

Congratulations on intermediate! Really sick animations. :)