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Postby The Black Mamba » Tue Apr 08, 2014 5:51 pm

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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby Mitch » Tue Apr 08, 2014 6:27 pm

Your kicks are formed really nicely, just remember to bring take the rest of the body into account when forming an attack. I know you wanted to go for a "careless fighter" kinda vibe, but I would have opted over animating the arms in a more dynamic fashion as it really brings home the power of the kicks. If you've ever done any sort of martial art a piece of advice that is pretty much universal is that the whole body should be used in an attack.

But that's just animation concept, your execution is tight af man.
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby The Black Mamba » Tue Apr 08, 2014 6:56 pm

Thanks man, but that's actually the oldest of my most recent lol. I put the list upside down for some reason.
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby Mitch » Tue Apr 08, 2014 6:59 pm

Actually nah my bad, I don't know why I wouldn't assume the top ones are newest.
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby Clauraz » Tue Apr 08, 2014 8:43 pm

God I love your style of animating man it's so clean and smooth!

That hyperbolic chamber!!! It's like perfect haha, are you the only person to make one?
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby The Black Mamba » Tue Apr 08, 2014 8:57 pm

Clauraz wrote:God I love your style of animating man it's so clean and smooth!

That hyperbolic chamber!!! It's like perfect haha, are you the only person to make one?


Never seen it before, so yeah, I'm pretty sure I am.
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby Clauraz » Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:11 pm

aaaah why you no make earlier haha, I needed one...
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby The Black Mamba » Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:24 am

Clauraz wrote:aaaah why you no make earlier haha, I needed one...


I'll give the .piv out when I finish my entry.
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby tenks » Wed Apr 09, 2014 7:26 am

That screenshot looks great, though the grey on white is hard to see, or that's gifrape.
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby The Black Mamba » Wed Apr 09, 2014 1:35 pm

tenks wrote:That screenshot looks great, though the grey on white is hard to see, or that's gifrape.


It's not, that's the color I chose cause that's the color of the time chamber. Thanks.
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby Clauraz » Wed Apr 09, 2014 8:31 pm

What collab is it for?? seems like it's gunna be special
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Re: TBM's Thread

Postby The Black Mamba » Wed Apr 09, 2014 11:29 pm

Clauraz wrote:What collab is it for?? seems like it's gunna be special


A collab on Shuniu.
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Re: TBM's Thread *Unfinished DBZ*

Postby The Black Mamba » Tue Apr 22, 2014 1:30 am

*Update*
Goku vs. Majin Vegeta (Unfinished)

An animation I started around a year ago. Due to the constant breaks I took, there are too many inconsistencies in the pace of the fight. To some it might seem noticeable and to others it might seem minuscule, but I can't help but notice it every time I play it back, so I can't finish it. The overall pace of the animation is too slow for me and I can't stand adding on to it anymore, knowing I don't like it. I tried to restart it a couple months back, but still didn't like the outcome. It just doesn't flow together in the way I wanted it to. I bitch too much, Anyway, HUGE credits to Joji for helping me out in the beginning of this, he gave me some great pointers about speed fighting, something I struggled with, and supported me throughout, and I used his electricity sticks too lol.

This was solely for the promotion of my pack, which has gotten as much recognition as it's pretty much gonna get, so I'm not too bummed about not finishing this.
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Re: TBM's Thread *Unfinished DBZ*

Postby Clauraz » Tue Apr 22, 2014 2:09 am

But but but it looks beautiful...
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Re: TBM's Thread *Unfinished DBZ*

Postby Silo » Tue Apr 22, 2014 9:01 am

A lot of the aspects of that DBZ animation are veteran quality for sure, there are a few small movements that still are lower quality, primarily in the fighting sequences, but your Efx and storyline with that, and the scenery are all amazing! well done!

I like the whole DBZ idea of fighting, never gets old.. Sad to hear you did it a year ago though! should keep it up with stuff like that :)

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EDIT: It seems you noticed what I noticed too, the animation gets really good, then you can see you took a break, then it gets worse, then really good, then you took a break, that may answer my comment above**

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