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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Grams » Thu Dec 04, 2014 9:44 pm

That was pretty awesome. I just wished that snazzy background was utilized a little more.
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Four » Thu Dec 04, 2014 11:30 pm

That was really cool. That dragon thing was by far my favorite part.
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Cressel » Fri Dec 05, 2014 1:44 am

I really liked it. The animation's length is great as well. My only problem with it is that you seem to find it hard to emphasize on power, the movements are clear and they do their job but they feel weak overall. You need to add bigger spacing with more dynamic poses to show more power while still keeping the movements clear.
Still your animations and movements are always so clean and that's something I really enjoy of your work.
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Amir » Fri Dec 05, 2014 2:18 am

That was pretty good, the movements are smooth and flow together well, but some things are off.
Like Cressel said, you need to show more power to your hits, it feels weak. Second, tye fighting was pretty boring at the most of the fight, because you just animated Goku hit Kid Buu to the other side of the screen, then he comes behind Kid Buu and knocking him around to the other side of the screen again. There should be more combos, not just ohe hit, though, there were some parts with combos and I liked them.
The transformations were pretty alright, I liked that when he turned to SSJ3, the lightning was cool. The animation kind of lacked in effects, and most of them weren't so detailed, but the Dragon Fist effect was sick, looked awesome.
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Mori » Fri Dec 05, 2014 7:23 am

Can you share he piv file please? (smile
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby tuna » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:48 am

i remember you posting a screenshot of this about 6-7 months ago, looks really nice. just wish there was a little more use of that background/that there was a background throughout the animation
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby The Black Mamba » Fri Dec 05, 2014 11:31 am

Elite44 wrote:Can you share he piv file please? (smile

The piv is available on the first page man, thank you everyone else for the comments and critisizem.
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Mori » Fri Dec 05, 2014 3:01 pm

Dude it's not avaible
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby The Black Mamba » Fri Dec 05, 2014 3:12 pm

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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Mori » Fri Dec 05, 2014 3:19 pm

Thanks a lot man!
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Ashero » Fri Dec 05, 2014 10:36 pm

Oh, I thought you left. I really like this new animation. I did notice that after Kid Buu was cut in half, he kept on fighting. ?
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby XElite109 » Sat Dec 06, 2014 5:17 pm

Cool shit dude.
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby Raymond » Sat Dec 06, 2014 6:18 pm

This is nuts. You showed me some of this a long time ago, but it's a lot longer now. I didn't know you had that kind of patience. It went a little fast at times, but all the movements were really clear. All the SS transformations looked good. I like how you zoomed out on him during the SS3 transformation. I just wish you would have used that background a little more. It was really well made, I can tell you spent a lot of time on it. I have a lot of respect for how much time you held onto this animation. It was worth it dude, it's a really clean animation.
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Re: TBM's Thread *DBZ Collab Entry*

Postby The Black Mamba » Sat Dec 06, 2014 7:53 pm

@Ray - I know, I had to wait till they finished flashing and posted the video. They took sooo long lol. Thanks for the comment
@Ashero - In the anime, Buu could easily regenerate, even if blown to bits. So the answer is yeah and thanks.

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Re: TBM's Thread *Peace*

Postby The Black Mamba » Sat Mar 14, 2015 11:25 am

*Update*
Goodbye Guys

I'm pretty sure you all already know I quit, but I already did this for my stick thread, so I was just like "fuck it". I had already cut all my other ties with DD and couldn't leave this out. It's not like that time back in 2010, I'm quitting foreal this time lol. I just have no time or interest in this anymore. I can't express the gratitude I feel toward all the people who commented on my animations over the years. I have tons of gratitude toward the regular posters to the people who only dropped a comment once or twice. You guys helped me get better, thank you. And with that, I'm out.

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