TheDarkDemon

Are you tol's son?

Me

Tol

Did a little joint with a friendo, thought it'd be nice to unrust. I'm gonna start animating more again so I guess I'll revive this thread to get some cc. ^^

updated it again ig

updated once more incase anymore cares about old settox ;;

isettox wrote:Me

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Tol

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I'm actually more like this one though hahah:


Anyways, I like your improvement so far! I can see some very nice choreography in your anims, especially the DBZ joint one.
I would suggest varying up your spacing (the variations need to make sense though, like if you want some movements to have more power than the others or when you want your movements to be more smoother than the others) since it tends to get a little bit too consistent which sort of result in these weird unnatural-looking movements (which is sort of your trademark flaw hehe). At least it isn't that apparent compared to your older stuff mainly because you sort of ease a lot more now.

So yeah, like I said, vary up your spacing and I guarantee you that's going to be your next big improvement! :)

You've improved a lot since I've last seen your animations.
But you still have that stiff look to your animations.
The spacing is also too constant, all movements have the same spacing regardless of what they are.
Try moving all the joints in your sticks, and experiment with different spacing.
It's nice talking to you again, Setto.

2 Projects that I recently finished, so that's why I haven't been doing much to upload. Would greatly appreciate a watch and some cc

Very nice, i see that some of it was inspired by Tols animation, you have improved a lot i say.
Your movements is pretty good but the flash effects covers them so it is hard see it clearly.
You can also try to experiment more with backgrounds and camera movements because it tends to make animations more epic.
Take a little more attention to the colors to prevent some eyesore or unclear objects, such as the dark character combined with the dark background.

It's been a long time coming. It was obvious you'd be moved up man, you're improved a ton!
Good work dude, keep it up!

tyvm you guys, Ill take the camera movements thing into mind, because that's something that i need to work on doing

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