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Ray/Crh's Thread : Ray vs Purp3l [Fortfeit]
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 12:21 am
by Ray
Ray / Crh123's Thread
~ Newest Animations[s] ~
http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/13075/
I lost : P
~ Intermediate Animations ~
DDC Entry
Version one (No sound)
Version Two
Probably Wont finish this
Staff Fight
Piv
Beginner Animations
Happiness!
Combo 3
Blood and bones
Combo 2.5
Back Kek
( Piv to be posted later)
How I got Intermediate
Piv
Combo 2
Piv
Combo
Swp Demo
Grey is owned
Kill Juke Collab [FAILED]
Harry Potter (Again)
Front Flip
Air Kicks and Punch
Black Vs Red
Jogger Assault
~
forgot how to spell
Rejected
~(Credz to Cress)~
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 3:17 am
by SIFTER
Hopefuly you'll post something other than DBZ. Don't take it personnaly, it's just that this sort of animations is starting to bore most of us because of how repetetive they became. I know it's fun to do, but please consider doing something other than that.
The animation itself was kinda decent, but the movements within need to flow better mostly because the spacing wasn't as consistent as it should have. Moreover, some poses were awkward and stiff. Try to observe how people position in real life and replicate those poses in Pivot. For instance,
this pose looks so unrealistic because both legs kinda had the same pose. If you've made one leg a bit straight(mostly the leg on the left), it'd look better. Overall, it needs work but was alright regardless.
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 6:12 pm
by Ray
Updated. The gif is kinda fast. look at the piv if you want it to slow down
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 6:41 pm
by Silo
a ton of potential with your animations. It looks like you have all the pieces to make an intermediate level animation, spread out across all of your animations.. If you could have the effects, movements, and other basics down~ all into one animation you may have yourself a shot at it!
Keep it up!
Courtesy? Thanks!
-Silo
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Mon Apr 28, 2014 8:32 pm
by The Black Mamba
Hey man, I really like your newest. It was an original concept and enjoyable to watch. kinda slow on the piv though, consider speeding it up next time. In terms of the running it looks off, people would generally run a little closer to the floor and run faster also his back wouldn't jerk forward in the way it did. Keep it up though.
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Tue Apr 29, 2014 7:59 pm
by Ray
I kinda feel like im in that awkward stage right before you go to the next rank. You just can't take that few steps forward but people tell me they think i'm high beginner and idk why but I'm just not progressing like I want to : P
I need help.
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:02 pm
by Ray
Updated, and poll added.
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:47 pm
by XElite109
Nice animations man you got a bit of stiffness and shakiness in some parts and maybe improve some timing/movements for some moves like the Big Bangkahmahameha
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:52 pm
by Silo
Not much realism in your newest animation..
think of it, both of his arms are EXACTLY together? It looks a little weird yah know? I think you should check your positioning on your sticks to add more realism, it may create better stuff yah know!? Just keep an eye on where everything is when you animate so it looks better <3
I would say borderline, some of your animations are almost there, others are not.. so keep it up I can see a move up soon for sure! :)
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 6:51 am
by Extra
Dude, I really like your stuff.
You got some twerky and stiff movements sometimes, but if you just straighten those out, you'll be fucking good to go!
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 10:04 am
by Amir
Hey Crh123, nice animations you have there, you're pretty close to interz but please don't rush because of that, your newest wasn't your best, the tail movements seem alright most of the animation but they look akward at times, the ending is the main problem because the head movements were really weird.
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:36 pm
by Ray
Thnx for the advice
New Animation, I'm gonna make an animations like flappy bird but with a stickman and I'm practicing for it.
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:55 pm
by The Specter
Looks good, I feel like before the first flap he should lean a little to the right a little more, or position the feet like that, like how you did the other times because they looked way better than the first one.
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 5:14 pm
by Ray
Thnx, Specter
Re: Ray/Crh123's Thread
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Thu May 01, 2014 12:45 am
by Ray
*Updated. Trying out some flow with a transformation animation (THAT RHYMED :D)