Ray/Crh's Thread : Ray vs Purp3l [Fortfeit]

[Amir]

Very good job, it was really entertaining.

[Ray]

U-u-u-pdate.

[Shiftor]

I really like the newest animation! As it is a preview however I do find it a little confusing, the sequence of scenes specifically. However to my eyes everything looks pretty good and smooth in it. Maybe a little bit of stiffness in the girl's movements, or her arms specifically. Also I'm not sure if this is a good idea or not but perhaps try making all of the vine monster move? Instead of just its limbs I mean. Either way, awesome stuff, keep it up.

[Ray]

Yeah you are right. I should cut out the first part because it doesnt make sense to others that havent seen the rest of it.
Thanks

[Amir]

Looks promising, can't wait!

[Ray]

My warrior from Shuniu's demo.

[Michi]

It looks really nice, although the stickman on the right is a bit shaky at the end.
Also the animation itself is pretty short, i'd love to see you finish it.

[Ray]

Update. Practicing for DDC13. Cuz I shall be able to enter that one... thats my goal.

Time ta get sewious.

[Amir]

That was pretty good, the kick was well animated, but after he punched, his arm shouldn't have stopped like that.
Overall your movements are smooth and flow very well, you got down the basic stuff. I think it was intermediate but you definitely need more longer animations. Keep it up!

[Ray]

Which of these is better? Trying to play around with the poses.

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[Amir]

I can't see any differences except the poses at the very beginning. The top one is better.

[Raymond]

The animations play slower on my work computer making it easier to compare these. I agree with Amir, he starts off too hunched over in the second one. I can also see you kept the leg he is kicking with extended for a longer period of time in the second animation. I prefer the way you have it in the first because it feels like there is more of a recoil in the kick, which helps display the power. When watching the animation at full speed, you can hardly notice the difference, but I would still go with the first one.

[Ray]

Thanks for the input you guys. I have a preview for my dbz collab entry here.

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[Jojishi]

The movements look great, particularly the part where Kid Buu forms into a ball and smashes Goku around. Some creativity in a DBZ animation which isn't found much, even if the move is taken from the show. I guess the main advice I can give is that it would be nice to have a bit of an intro, or at least 10-20 frames of animation where Kid Buu is on the screen before Goku starts beating him up. Going straight into the action like you did is disorientating and also looks lazy (not a good quality of the typical DBZ animations).

I think everything else is great and the one complaint I have can easily be improved upon. Great action so far man!

[Ray]

Joji i luv u.

Preview for something longer Im working on. Rank team better give me what I want. Or this is gonna get ugly.