Ray/Crh's Thread : Ray vs Purp3l [Fortfeit]

[tuna]

hey man that actually looked really nice. i'd just like to say a few things about poses and such though.
small attacks (jabs, lead hand attacks, lead foot attacks) are snappy
big attacks (rear leg attack, rear hand attack) a followed through

strong:

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weak:

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what im trying to say is the movement of the arm after he's punched didn't look right

what you've done:

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eeeeeewwwwwwww

[Ray]

[Will]

The momentum in this animation is thrown off by how little the default moves. Having it spring back to its original position after a hit means the attacking stick has to stop and dump all his speed from the run. This is also accentuated by the tremor you used because the stick moved backwards for a frame. This results in the jump kick looking powerless.

The spinning kick was rather impressive however, and the action stance with some small footsteps was a good idea. Nice job.

[Aron]

The default stk's reaction really brought down the quality of the animation. Nice job overall though.

[Franklin]

I think it would be a bit better if the default stick tilted as it was hit and didn't just pop back into place. I think it is usually fine to use the default stick as a static target, but when you do it needs to be able to come off the ground or get knocked over. The spinning kick was pretty cool, though.

[Ray]

Thanks for your comments guys, just trying to get some basics of fighting down.

[Ray]

Long time no see ppls. This was my BBODD entry but I kinda lost inspiration and plus it isnt that good anyway..

[Lord]

Lol, how long ago was that
XD
Nice animation nonetheless. Stiff movements, but I was always the same. :)

[Ray]

I might continue this and make it something longer or some shit like that... idk.

back kek

[SIFTER]

Now first of,

what type of fuckery were you trying to pull there? lol. Else, generally, the best part of the whole animation is the jump as it's had just the right amount of anticipation and air time. What really bothers me is how weak the reaction and poses are which ought to be exaggerated. Exaggerated spacing for the reaction from one hand, and exaggerated poses on the other.

[Ray]

Lol, yeah there were some technical difficulties there.

Btw, im actually gonna make that harry potter project I was talking about that long time ago.... just testing some more things out.



Somebody move me up already!! :3

[Llama]

was expecting a hairy penis. sorely disappointed.

Pretty nice stuff, man, especially after such a long time away.

One thing that bothers me is that when the figure walks over, his entire upper body, save for the arms, is stiff as a board; when he stops walking, it's like his spine suddenly remembered how to move and shows a little bit more dynamism. Just try to move every joint following the flow of movement so that it doesn't look awkward. The glasses also wobbled a lot initially, but you smoothed it out near the end, so that's a plus

[Cheese]

Make your project, and I'll make my own, we can move up together.

[Ray]

Make your project, and I'll make my own, we can move up together.

ur on m8.

And yeah llama, that's how I get ya. (y)

[Ray]

Since everyone is saying that its actually good...

Btw, thanks for all the people who commented positive things on that freestyle thread <333