Ray/Crh's Thread : Ray vs Purp3l [Fortfeit]

[Amir]

UPDATE >*<

Wheel Kick


Thnx Lush :DD

This looks pretty good.
The kick is done very nicely and I can tell it's a powerful kick, but I think you overdid it a little with the spacing to show power, looked to fast for me, but overall it was nice man.

[Ray]

Hey, you asked for CC, so here we go. I'm just gonna rank your newest 3 that you have posted.


Practice Transition Poses.)
That looked pretty good. There's nothing much to say tho. If you're gonna practice pose transitioning, try adding more than 2 poses in this animation.

Wheel Kick.)
That looked pretty good as well. I noticed that the foot that stays stationary when he kicks, it does this weird thing, and the feet switch sides. When he kicks, you should probably have the foot stay the same, or have it move, but return back to the original position it was in after the kick. Also, the leg during the kick, I couldn't really see it that well, but his leg sort of breaks during the kick.

Kicking and Punching.)
I didn't see any punching in this. But the leg that stays in place is really twitchy during the kick. I didn't really see anything otherwise from that.

Sorry, something was wrong with the link for the punch. its there now.

[Kirin]

He's headless nice and smooth so far. Still the animation is very short , you should follow through until the animation is finished.

Any way nice animations man.

[Ray]

Update

[Amir]

Looking pretty intresting but there are no actual movements in this.
Hope to see it finished though, keep it up!

[Ray]

[Cheese]

The food placement is off, but whatever, you animated this one with join.me on, under pressure.

[Ray]

Rejected


CC appreciated.

[Kompressor]

It was practically perfect until around the end, although hes going off screen make sure to still make an effort to allow the joints to flow, they become stiff as they exit. May I suggest a slight tremor as hes being pushed? It may look weird while animating it but I think it'll make the push look a tad stronger. the floor slam reaction doesn't match with the power he fell with, so polish it up.

otherwise awesome animation :)

CC in return always appreciated.

[Ray]

Playing around with the same base






E: Fixed it

[Kompressor]

E: Fixed it

Literally the movements are great just, the camera fix should have been eased in, I felt like it abruptly stopped although the movements were great.

[thebiscotticakeman]

well ray i think its time for you to ......

make a character :T

anyways your animations are fine for me but what you should do right now is make a character demo or a full fight animation that should probably get you my intermediate seal of approval

[Mat]

make a character :T

How does that have anything to do with getting intermediate? lol

[Ray]

make a character :T

How does that have anything to do with getting intermediate? lol

What an honor. The mighty mat has looked upon my thread and posted. Can you give me some cc?

In a bit, after I get a shit load of caffeine in me.

[Ray]

Updated broken links and added a new animation that I used for pivot points

http://www.animtube.net/animations/deta ... 379138.gif