Ray/Crh's Thread : Ray vs Purp3l [Fortfeit]

[The Specter]

I think that there is a little too much flow on the arms, and not enough emphasis on the second transfomration. I know there was double framing but it needs to show more power rather than flowy mushy arms.

[The Black Mamba]

He's too floppy, If he's transforming you might want to make his limbs more stern and up the spacing a little to make it a little more intense to help add to the transformation. You might also want to choose a movement one of the DBZ characters would do when transforming, something believable.

[Kirin]

Goku's source of power is anger . He looks too chilled in this, you know. when I have time I am gonna make a thread in freestyle showing you what I mean.

[Ray]

Thnx for the comments you guys. I get what you mean kirin, I really was just trying something different

[Ciechaan]

I love ur smoothly style in animation its realy lovely. I can saw stiffness in ur anims but only when ur stick are stooping or squating.
In DBZ animation u hide a lot of moves with blurs , its not god in my opinion .Work on it and u will get inters .

Courtesy?

[Ray]

A few updates

[Kompressor]

You inspire me to keep my extremely eased style, I love the smoothness of your animations, but make sure you keep with your physics cause they are definitely a factor in moving up. I enjoy the creative fighters and DBZ related animations (especially those fx on the rocks) but try to show of your fundamental movements in an small animation or so :) keep it up you'll be intermediate in no time.

[Bullzeye]

the bounce was the best
others were a litlle extra eased I guess
courtesy pls

[Kirin]

DBZ animation was boss bro!

[The Specter]

Your dbz anim was really nice, some of goku's movements seemed a little shakey or a little too over eased, but overall it was pretty much inters quality.
However your bounce anim wasnt even that long but you still had shakey legs at the top of it.
Lastely your fall test was decent but the bouncing on the limbs was done a little too much.

[Ray]

Update, Trying to focus on realistic things and i'm going to start with fighting.
How are these?

[Cheese]

Something feels a little off about the punch, although it just might be me, and that kick looks real powerful, I can never do anything but those reverse kicks, nice job man!

[Ray]

UPDATE >*<

Wheel Kick


Thnx Lush :DD

[Ray]

I used to have a bit of a hard time forming a pose so was practicing it.

[Gary]

Hey, you asked for CC, so here we go. I'm just gonna rank your newest 3 that you have posted.


Practice Transition Poses.)
That looked pretty good. There's nothing much to say tho. If you're gonna practice pose transitioning, try adding more than 2 poses in this animation.

Wheel Kick.)
That looked pretty good as well. I noticed that the foot that stays stationary when he kicks, it does this weird thing, and the feet switch sides. When he kicks, you should probably have the foot stay the same, or have it move, but return back to the original position it was in after the kick. Also, the leg during the kick, I couldn't really see it that well, but his leg sort of breaks during the kick.

Kicking and Punching.)
I didn't see any punching in this. But the leg that stays in place is really twitchy during the kick. I didn't really see anything otherwise from that.