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Re: R.B. thread:breaking the rust remake

Postby Lush » Fri Feb 27, 2015 2:35 am

Love it man. (thumbsup
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Re: R.B. thread:breaking the rust remake

Postby Amir » Fri Feb 27, 2015 4:41 am

That's better now. I still think you need to ease more in some parts cause there is still a little choppiness but the second half of the animation looks really nice now, I also like how you added power to the hits, and lovely poses man.
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Re: R.B. thread:breaking the rust remake

Postby RetiredBATS » Fri Feb 27, 2015 5:20 pm

TY for criticism guys. Here the last update. Added some dynamic camera and kinda plot

http://i.imgur.com/NqhNB5Z.gif

Gif raped though.
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Re: R.B. thread:Breaking rust final update

Postby Mori » Sat Feb 28, 2015 6:22 am

This naked women though..haha

As for the animation, It's pretty good!
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Re: R.B. thread:Breaking rust final update

Postby RetiredBATS » Sat Feb 28, 2015 6:30 am

Mori wrote:This naked women though..haha

As for the animation, It's pretty good!


Sculpture dude! Its a sculpture (cheesygrin
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Re: R.B. thread:Breaking rust final update

Postby Amir » Sat Feb 28, 2015 6:52 am

I love the new stuff you added.
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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby RetiredBATS » Sat Feb 28, 2015 1:49 pm

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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby Raymond » Sat Feb 28, 2015 2:08 pm

Your style is really choppy, but that choppy sense adds more power to your animations. It was a cool fight. My favorite part is that rolling kick he does after he takes out the first green guy. It flowed really nice. That's one thing about your animations that makes them stand out. Your good at linking up combos together that aren't repetitive. Every time I try to animate a fight like this, I get caught up on how similar all the attacks look, but you do a great job of showing the difference in attacks.
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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby RetiredBATS » Sat Feb 28, 2015 3:12 pm

Raymond wrote:Your style is really choppy, but that choppy sense adds more power to your animations. It was a cool fight. My favorite part is that rolling kick he does after he takes out the first green guy. It flowed really nice. That's one thing about your animations that makes them stand out. Your good at linking up combos together that aren't repetitive. Every time I try to animate a fight like this, I get caught up on how similar all the attacks look, but you do a great job of showing the difference in attacks.


Thanks! Yeah that choppiness thingy is on purpose i guess. I can ease anims but im trying something new. When i ease atacks look not powerful enough. However now I`m afraid of them being too choppy (cheesygrin I`ll try out diffirent styles i guees. Thanks for your opinion man, means a lot to me!
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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby Mori » Sat Feb 28, 2015 4:07 pm

That was fantastic man, really firecrackerish.
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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby RetiredBATS » Sun Mar 01, 2015 1:22 pm

I dont know if should double frame or not? any ideas?

http://i.imgur.com/3BF5UnfR.gif

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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby Four » Sun Mar 01, 2015 1:33 pm

I'd say not, without double frames looks nicer.
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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby Mori » Sun Mar 01, 2015 1:35 pm

FourAcross wrote:I'd say not, without double frames looks nicer.

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Re: R.B. thread:Short Fight

Postby Franklin » Sun Mar 01, 2015 1:37 pm

Yeah, the version without double framing is better. The run looks a little weird, though.
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