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Re: I did a combo

Postby Blademaster » Sun May 22, 2016 4:36 am

woah that wasn't bad at all man. the only thing I disliked where the shorten arms. But they actually didn't bother me that much.
the attacks were shown of quite well otherwise and you were able to follow up nicely.

I loved that last reaction of that punch in the stomach man. Also how the red guy is liking doing that move with his arm adds something cool to the animation. Dude, you really should post more stuff. You got quality content there!
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Re: I did a combo

Postby Michi » Sun May 22, 2016 2:49 pm

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I love that gut punch at the end, the reaction really showed that it must've hurt like fuck.
Before that it's kinda eh, uneased movements with barely any anticipation, but still impressive choreography.
good job babe
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Re: I did a combo

Postby XElite109 » Wed May 25, 2016 7:21 pm

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i made a run
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Re: I made a run loop for pp

Postby Crafty » Wed May 25, 2016 7:35 pm

That's really nice. I loved how the ending gave the animation a bit more character. Great job man
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Re: I made a run loop for pp

Postby Echo » Thu May 26, 2016 12:55 pm

I could make a better one (heart
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Lithium wrote:Enjoyed that, how about making one with a huge boulder chasing a dude. I reckon you'd be really good at something like that. (thumbsup (thumbsup
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Re: I made a run loop for pp

Postby XElite109 » Thu May 26, 2016 3:52 pm

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Re: Now i made something heavy

Postby Mori » Thu May 26, 2016 4:29 pm

Daaamn dude this is pretty well done, and looks very realistic.
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Re: Now i made something heavy

Postby Hypo » Thu May 26, 2016 9:02 pm

That was pretty well done man, the preparation was good, the struggle was good and the ending was spot on in my opinion.
I'm just not digging the beginning of the pull...

I'm assuming the point where he actually begins to pull up is when his head bops up real fast.
If that's the case, then the rock should stay on floor for a while longer, with him still struggling, and only then begin to slowly go up.
If that is not the case, and he's pulling the rock before the head-bop (since it seems the rock begins to go up before that move) then there should be some more time before the head-bop happens (In this case, I'm interpreting the head-bop as a strength reinforcement kind of thing).

So yeah things get a bit confusing for me there... Maybe I'm being to picky.
Either way, the animation is really good man, keep it up!
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Re: Now i made something heavy

Postby XElite109 » Thu May 26, 2016 10:42 pm

hmm i guess i can add a a frame or 2 to fix that thanks for the feedback :3
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Re: Now i made something heavy

Postby Jojishi » Fri May 27, 2016 6:06 pm

I really like this one. There's depth because of the layering and perspective on the legs. You showed the struggle good by making the spacing shaky in the right places. The back was positioned well. I can't find any flaws on this one so nice work.

The run "loop" is great. I like that it fools you into thinking it's just a run loop but then he tires out. I could tell something was going on when his back kept leaning forward, like he was starting to struggle. And then you animated him getting out of breath and that's when I said out loud, "whoa...". The part where he smoked a cigarette made me literally lol.

I really like these animations man. :)
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Re: Now i made something heavy

Postby XElite109 » Fri May 27, 2016 6:29 pm

thanks jojishi i'm really glad you like it bro :3
I smiled when you said that "whoa" part :)
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Re: call me yasuo

Postby XElite109 » Mon May 30, 2016 5:33 pm

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i jizz on rocks sometimes
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Re: call me yasuo

Postby SIFTER » Mon May 30, 2016 6:39 pm

ahhhhh, mannnnn, I love that spinning sort of anticipation. It almost looks something Omega would do. Particles could have lasted much longer, though. Overall, it's a pretty nice animation.
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Re: call me yasuo

Postby Llama » Mon May 30, 2016 6:59 pm

Hi yasuo

Those shifting colors were pretty cool and that spin was dope. I just wished the fire was a bit longer lived.
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Re: call me yasuo

Postby Blademaster » Tue May 31, 2016 8:32 am

Face the wind! HASAKI!!!
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