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Postby KushNotsee » Tue Jan 24, 2017 10:14 am

Hi guys. I was once a stick figure animator a long time ago. I used macromedia flash and pivot way back when I was about 10-11. I quit because as a child I couldn't bear the weight of internet assholes but now I'm 18 and much more mature. I thought since I have a lot of fun animating these sort of things I'd join and try again. Heres a little snipbit of a quickie i created (I call it broly vs noob). I made it in about 20 minutes so nothing to special. Please tell me what you guys think and don't hold back on the criticism (smile
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Re: Where do I stand

Postby Jojishi » Tue Jan 24, 2017 9:11 pm

Welcome to our site, KushNotsee. It's cool that you've animated in the past.

The animation's actually quite good! It looks smooth, all of Broly's joints move in each frame, it's eased well and the beam looks nice. If the stick-figure reacted to the attacks it may have looked better, even if it was stiff as a board but got pushed back or bounced around. If you want to improve, Mitch's tutorial is quite helpful.

I understand why you felt that way all those years ago, but there's no need to worry about us being mean these days. Also, if you want to post more animations please do it in the Beginners Hall. :)
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Re: Where do I stand

Postby KushNotsee » Wed Jan 25, 2017 3:16 am

Thank you for the feedback jojishi! I feel very welcome!
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Re: Where do I stand

Postby Tops620 » Wed Jan 25, 2017 5:23 am

Hi mature guy, that animation are pretty smooth, and has old-school style, pretty cool.
Welcome to the site ,read the rules, and stay longer than before.
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Re: Where do I stand

Postby Massive Legend » Wed Jan 25, 2017 4:52 pm

fuck your signature


also i'd recommend doing some regular stick movement tests (not dbz) just some short practices to help you get movement better
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Re: Where do I stand

Postby Jojishi » Wed Jan 25, 2017 7:21 pm

Sorry but I had to remove your signature since it was a bit graphic and gross. Please use something more tasteful in the future. Other than that, have fun.
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