Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2-2

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Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2-2

Postby Outdated » Sat Aug 20, 2016 11:44 am

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Re: Outdated Art

Postby Blademaster » Sun Aug 21, 2016 4:15 am

not too bad! I like it.
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Re: Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2

Postby Outdated » Thu Mar 16, 2017 6:07 pm

http://i.imgur.com/aXGXl5F.jpg
some more sketchbook stuff. Feedback would be awesome, I still have a long way to go lol

also added a self portrait; it doesn't really capture the likeness but i guess it could be worse.
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Re: Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2

Postby Blademaster » Fri Mar 17, 2017 3:16 pm

Outdated wrote:http://i.imgur.com/aXGXl5F.jpg
some more sketchbook stuff. Feedback would be awesome, I still have a long way to go lol


some of the stuff is actually really good. Sure proportions might be off alittle, but you really tried to draw some decent lines and kept it clean.

i do like the hand and the girls most, especially that faceless one. Nice bodystructure. Practice makes perfect mah dude. (thumbsup
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Re: Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2-2

Postby Outdated » Tue Apr 04, 2017 1:25 am

rest of sketchbook "2" time to start a new one for April. Not a lot of technical stuff here
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Re: Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2-2

Postby ZucchiniJuice » Tue Apr 04, 2017 5:25 pm

You got some anatomy problems, so I duked out this that lays out the sections of the torso and how they look like. I took me a loonng fucking time to figure this out due to all the other "How to draw bodies" being super complicated. But yeah just watch for those sections of the body.

What makes a butt isn't 2 circles, it is actually 3 sections of the body that forms it.
The red portion (the stomach area),
the orange (the actual butt)
and the yellow portion (the thighs that go all the way to the top of the hips that actually is the one that forms most of the roundness).

I hope this hepls my man.
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Re: Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2-2

Postby Outdated » Wed Apr 05, 2017 1:31 am

thanks for the feedback and the ref
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Re: Outdated Art - Sketchbook 2-2

Postby Raymond » Wed Apr 05, 2017 10:42 am

You've got some cool sketches. My favorite is the self portrait, it looks like you spent the most time on that one. Like you I also find it somewhat difficult to criticize people's artwork. I feel like pushing my own style/habits on someone just constricts their creativity. I think the biggest thing that looks off in some of these are your proportions, but ZucchiniJuice gave some great advice on that already. It even helped me out, thanks ZucchiniJuice. Anyways I hope you share more with us in the future!
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