Ray's Art: Tony and Ali

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Re: Ray's Art: Logan

Postby Blademaster » Wed Mar 08, 2017 3:11 am

Hey, that's not too bad. I can see logan in this one. You kept it quite clean. Maybe you could get a little more into details, adding more wrinkels (idk if spelled right).
References help out a lot. You just gotta take your time.

You're making progress tho. Keep that up.^^
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Re: Ray's Art: Alisha

Postby Raymond » Mon Mar 20, 2017 11:07 pm

Thanks Blademaster. I made another for my friend and I got a couple more requests so I'll be updating this occasionally.

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Re: Ray's Art: Alisha

Postby Blademaster » Wed Mar 22, 2017 1:16 pm

duh. well i like that it is clean.

But r.i.p. proportions. Might use some guidelines here.
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Re: Ray's Art: Tony and Ali

Postby Raymond » Wed Mar 22, 2017 4:36 pm

Thanks again man. I made another and used a pose reference for this one. The proportions are still a little off though. This drawing thing is hard...

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Re: Ray's Art: Tony and Ali

Postby Daniël » Wed Mar 22, 2017 4:53 pm

You should try sketching more. All your drawings seem to have some pretty hard lines, this gives you very little space for correcting and adjusting. If you sketch your drawings more it allows you to adjust proportions on the spot.

Softer lines are also better for creating little wrinkles without having them stand out too much. I'd recommend you'd use a softer pencil like a 2B.

Anyway, keep it up. Don't stop until DD knows everyone you hang out with.
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