TheDarkDemon

Should do a fucking scenic one similar to winterfem for a desktop bg.

hey so i did something again

Phewz wrote:hey so i did something again

All of your stuff is just so great man.
I really like the new one. I feel like something is wrong with the hat but I can't put my finger on it, lighting looks grand though, man!

Do more fucking hummingbird fagit.

This is cute as fuck do more

swiggity swebcomic

i'm making a webcomic

Daniel wrote:It's cool that you got into making a webcomic, though there are a few bits of criticism I have.

First off, you don't necessarily have the greatest handwriting (it's okay, neither do I), you might want to switch over to typing, which always looks a lot better in my opinion or perhaps you could try to write neater.
Beyond that, the way you draw isn't nearly up to par with your normal drawings and while that makes sense, considering comics are a lot more work, I think the very bland coloring style drags the comic down as a whole and I would wholeheartedly recommend you to improve the quality at the cost of quantity.

initally i was shading it and everything but then it took me a month to do the first four pages and i wasn't happy with that

i'm hoping that the art quality will increase as i go along

disclaimer
not actually dicks

Is your newest update the TTGL one?

I think you depicted the original characters really well. What stood out the most are the glasses on the older male character (sorry, it's been awhile since I watched the series so I don't remember his name, but those glasses are something I will never forget, they symbolize that character.) I would say that the younger kid from the series was the hardest for me to recognize. I almost thought he was a girl at first and I think that's what threw me off. I think it's the style of his hair though. Also did he wear glasses in the series? He always had the goggles on his head, but I don't remember the glasses.

Anyways, your really talented man. I can still see your own style mixed in, but it definitely resembles the original characters. Way better than the stupid stickfigures I move around on screen. You should see if you could eventually get your comics featured in local newspapers or something. In my opinion, they are more than good enough.

bep
did a thing

bumpdate

That's really awesome, although I think the feet could be different imo

DragonCheesecake wrote:although I think the feet could be different imo

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it's not much good telling me "the feet could be different" but not actually telling me how i could make the feet look better
do you mean putting them at a different angle? making them face out/in more? drawing them from a different perspective? it's good to be specific when you're giving criticism

also i updated

Phewz wrote:

DragonCheesecake wrote:although I think the feet could be different imo

sdgsfgfdsfg
it's not much good telling me "the feet could be different" but not actually telling me how i could make the feet look better
do you mean putting them at a different angle? making them face out/in more? drawing them from a different perspective? it's good to be specific when you're giving criticism

also i updated

Oh sorry, perhaps having the not having the feet facing the camera as much

Pretty nice traditional work, I really like the colour choice for the pens too
The hatch colour shading is really neato, I hope to see more like this