Some Art from Deviant Art

[Row]

Blake


Trent (Row) vs Lucien (FlashFighter) short comic


Zxem x Love (Omega)


Lucien old (Flash's old sig)


Popo Pahi


My Signature


My Signature - Zxem edit

[Mitch]

I remember you used to be me and Ed's joke guy when it came to art but you're actually pretty fucking good these days. Proportions and smooth line arcs still need more work but your coloring and shading has come along well.

[Kev]

you should do some figure drawings to begin with

[Row]

you should do some figure drawings to begin with

I do a lot of figure drawings, the top is the newest when i did a lot, the other ones are old when i didnt do much figure drawings.

I remember you used to be me and Ed's joke guy when it came to art but you're actually pretty fucking good these days. Proportions and smooth line arcs still need more work but your coloring and shading has come along well.

I can see why I'd be the joke guy.....
And Y u no give me no details on reaper >:( i wants to draw him.

[Kev]

i mean drawing from figures

if you're drawing from reference then you need to do even more basic shapes and stuff

[kellawgs]

10/10

[Jojishi]

I think you need to tone down the bloom, blurs, glows and transparencies. It feels like you're using them to hide some of the flaws and it comes off looking really cheap. Sorry. :/

If you can avoid doing that so much, and either shade the characters manually or with gradients it will start to look a lot better in my opinion. I feel like you could also benefit from studying human anatomy a little because some things are out of proportion. The foreshortening in the Lucien old drawing wasn't done too well which also didn't help the proportions look good. Study and reference the human body. Break the body into basic shapes (like another poster here said) and then work on adding the details in.

I will state some good things though. You can draw hands really well, which is quite hard to do. I also thought the faces of the characters looked good for the most part. The background in that night drawing was awesome. You did a good job on the tone and the shape of the clouds.

The Blake drawing at the top looks fantastic. The use of primary colours just works extremely well in this one. The blurring used here works to make the wolf appear transcendent, as though he is like no other wolf. Excellent job here.

[tenks]

10/10

[Row]

Not able to edit topic, fix please. Anyways, Thanks a lot guys :D.
Make a quick concept thing map of Trents clothes

terrible base

Left to Right -
Row 1 - Original Attire
1. Fighting Bandages for protection :l, short sports tights thing.
2. Tight sports long sleeve thing, Track pants. Both heat resistant, gotta stay hydrated right :l
3. Track jacket, Clan dogtags, silver chains with gold rim around them. First tag says "Trent" second tag is symbol of his wolf clan. Custom made lether wristband - carries rope with spear - running boots, 100lb, each, ankle weights.

Row 2 - Alt. Attires
1. Sleeveless jacket, his tight sports undershirt long sleeve thing, cargo pants. ankle weights
2. Muay Thai Training outfit
3. Sword/Katana training outfit