Phewz wrote:hey so i did something again
Daniel wrote:It's cool that you got into making a webcomic, though there are a few bits of criticism I have.
First off, you don't necessarily have the greatest handwriting (it's okay, neither do I), you might want to switch over to typing, which always looks a lot better in my opinion or perhaps you could try to write neater.
Beyond that, the way you draw isn't nearly up to par with your normal drawings and while that makes sense, considering comics are a lot more work, I think the very bland coloring style drags the comic down as a whole and I would wholeheartedly recommend you to improve the quality at the cost of quantity.
DragonCheesecake wrote:although I think the feet could be different imo
Phewz wrote:DragonCheesecake wrote:although I think the feet could be different imo
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it's not much good telling me "the feet could be different" but not actually telling me how i could make the feet look better
do you mean putting them at a different angle? making them face out/in more? drawing them from a different perspective? it's good to be specific when you're giving criticism
also i updated
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