Art Showcase-"Maneater"

[Juke]

That's an awesome painting. You're really getting good at this man you're definitely improving!
The shading is a lot better in the newest one. I don't know too much about painting, but maybe make the colours blend in with each other a bit more and try make it more clean looking.
Great stuff though man.

[Four]

That looks real nice man, your art skills are sky rocketing.

[Phewz]

yeeeeaaaaaa brah that's my shit
that's looking so much better man

[Senzo]

Man, I'm liking this painting and drawing shit.

[Juke]

Wow man, the colours look ALOT better in this one. Great improvements!
I'm not sure but maybe the structure of the face is a bit off but in terms of the painting it's really good.

[Senzo]

Thanks for the feedback, man!

[Raymond]

I just want to say that you are talented at everything! lol damnit man I wish I had your talent!

[Jojishi]

You've improved a lot. I think this one looks great and you really seem to be nailing the hair on each of your portraits. The lighting is improved and you're getting better with the skin. I liked your self portrait, but something about the skin made it look clay or plastic like (even though the rest looks awesome in this). You improved on that in your newest by a huge margin.

The main thing I think needs improvement would be the right eye. The pupil looks a bit oddly shaped. I think the edge of the bottom eye lid is a bit squiggly as well. I think that's the best advice I can give for now, but maybe study up on ears a little.

Everything else is really good. You have a lot more skill than I do. I'm a bit jealous of your talent as always. Your strong points are the hair, structure of the face and noses look good as well as the mouths. The eyes and ears could use some improvement. Your lighting has improved but I think you can get better at that as well although it's looking fine right now. :)

[ZucchiniJuice]

To my eye, everything seems really plastic-y.
Other than that, you color better than 95% of the people here.

[Senzo]

Perhaps the fact of it being plasticy is part of my style? I just throw colours and blend them, and this is what I get. Thanks for the comments, guys! :)

[Aron]

God damn I love that slight simplicity, while not quite looking "simple", you know what I'm saying?

[ZucchiniJuice]

Hmmmm I would say you're style isn't particularly plastic-like. Your style seems to be more pushing for realism, rather than us anime/cartoon weebos here. The plastic ness is really evident in your self-portrait. I'd say it's more lack of experience, since your newer ones are getting less plasticy by the second. The only good thing that the plastic-ness does is it makes it look amazingly 3D. Like its a picture of a 3D model your creating. If you could keep that 3D look and make it less plasticy, ooh dang.

Your self portrait one I still refer as your best from the whole 3D deal, it's entirely unique too.

[Aron]

You gotta keep consistent shading if you want it to look realistic.

The shading beneath the nose is a lot darker than, say, just above the eye or just below the lip. It makes it stand out too much.

[Senzo]

3 things more for you. I was without my computer for a few days and had to pull things off traditionally.

[ZucchiniJuice]

Your drawings are getting slightly more and more scary looking with very high detail to things. Its like those paintings you see in a scary game, then it's eyes just turn at you when you look at it.

It kinda reminds me of this animation from one of my favorite flash animators.

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