by Senzo » Tue Sep 08, 2015 8:13 pm
Study the facial proportions a bit more, and also the facial planes for correct shading. I don´t like your use of colours really much as shown in your latest piece of work, explore more your palette and play with the HUEs, don´t stick to only 2 or 3 colours. Finally, your drawings lacks in terms of composition. Your characters are always placed in the center wich is an enormous mistake and makes the piece not interesting to look at. Use diagonal lines to place them instead, so that the eyes can find a place to rest in your image.