MCToast's arts

[MCToast]

Some new shit:
the hair is unfinished and stuff isn't polished.

[tuna]

its p cool man, at least, it doesnt look ugly. idk anything about art but you seem to have it

[TheRavenHouse]

That's so gay, what'd you make that for your boyfriend or something?

see it's funny cause yeah srry lv u bby

[SIFTER]

Frankly the best part about this drawing is the shading since it was executed next to perfectly as it's really given a great sense of depth and form to both figures. What really bothers me, though, are the hands, especially the blonde's hand that's grabbing the boy's elbow. That added to the blonde's arm that seems off propotions. You were probably going for foreshortening but you've executed it incorrectly. Don't take my word heavily, but if I were you, I'd try to add some drop shadows behind the arm to show that it's away from his side, and edit the contour so it'd look like something like this

Spoiler:

Maybe the hand could be even bigger considering the head's size(hand should be as big as the head). But that might be just me being nitpicky.

The [insert impossible-to-pronounce name] in the blonde one wasn't drawn right as it goes from the very bottom of the ear to the very top of the sternum which isn't what was done in the blonde one's neck. And for the ear itself, well, you could just refer yourself to your own ear or real life pictures.

The rest is all good. I really like the picture as it has got some warm and fuzzy intimacy feeling to it. I get that from the brown haired one in especial. Really, good job for what you've done.

[MCToast]

mm, they're bros, jesus.
Yeah the arm wad supposed to just rest there, not be foreshortened. I know it's pretty fucked up, but idk how to prevent mistakes like that in the future.

If you have time for DD you should have time for skype too Andy :,(

[Lukas]

you still got that explicit shit going on

[TheRavenHouse]

Umm, they're bros, jesus.

If you have time for DD you should have time for skype too Andy :,(

I do. I'm just being tsundere.

Also I gotta say about the hands/head size thing, they're children, and kids have way bigger heads than adults. The hand size isn't perfect, but they definitely shouldn't be the size of the face. It's a more chibi style too, not realism, so the cute features are exaggerated. I ain't trying to defend your work or say it's perfect, I just wanna make sure the next time you draw a couple kids their hands aren't massive.

[Cressel]

This is really enjoyable to look at. Nice job Toast.

[Caleb]

I just wanna make sure the next time you draw a couple kids their hands aren't massive.

I could totally see McToast draw way over the top hands for every drawing he makes in his life now actually.

Also fuck man, the shading on the blonde's head is really good. But yeah, the arm of brownhairboi is T-rex, doesn't look all that 3d so work on that foreshortening if you care enough. You have a cute way of drawing ears, don't think I've seen them drawn like that before. Your art style is generally just eye candy if you ask me. Now draw some fucked up furry shit.

[MCToast]

nvm

[tuna]

wtf thats super scary man

[MCToast]

yeah ok new stuff

[Phewz]

i really like how you've rendered the jacket, the shininess is pretty on-point and i like the texture you've pulled off so seriously mad kudos to you there

the shading everywhere else on the figure ought to be darker tho, looks really flat right now
gotta bring out them forms more son

[ZucchiniJuice]

If I were to say something for (criteek?), maybe try expanding the color plalet, like instead of using brown and darker brown, orange to orangy-brown, to brown, dark brown, dark brown-red, etc etc etc.