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Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Strider » Sun Oct 18, 2015 3:40 pm

Spent a lot of time on this. Haven't drawn in forever and I've always been pretty bad at it, so I thought I'd try practicing poses. Hopefully I can get some more done.
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Re: Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Lord » Sun Oct 18, 2015 4:00 pm

That's looking very nice Strider!
Just one thing... The calfs seem to a little large, or the space between the thigh and calf and behind the knee-cap is too skinny

Other than that I'd love to see some more full bodies from you. ;)
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Re: Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Strider » Mon Oct 19, 2015 12:16 am

Thanks, you might be right, I'll keep that in mind. I intend to draw another one today, I'll try to incorporate smaller calves. But the shapes and stuff are mostly alright, right? Do the feet look acceptable? I didn't even want to try drawing hands, that's a whole other battle for another time.
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Re: Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Strider » Mon Oct 19, 2015 2:03 am

Drew another one. Not quite as happy with it, but I also spent way less time on it.
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Re: Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Cowboy Memebop » Mon Oct 19, 2015 9:40 am

are you just drawing the edges? id suggest drawing these structurally and building muscle on top.. i wanna help u out but i have school in like 20 mins lol
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Re: Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Strider » Mon Oct 19, 2015 9:47 am

Yeah, I know it's a good idea to do it like that, but I've never had the patience. I usually just piece together reference pictures, since my ideal drawing style would be to be able to put down lines that form a good shape without having to analyze the shape before-hand. If that makes sense? Thanks either way man, no worries.
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Re: Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Cowboy Memebop » Mon Oct 19, 2015 1:32 pm

i get what u mean but that usually happens after u get past the structural phase and u can eventually visualize it in your head without having to draw those things out. that's how i understand it at least after practicing it for awhile now. takes time

for now though i'll just say the body's legs look a little too long and too big compared to her upper body. also the pinch between where the rib cage and the torso meet is kinda sharp. think of that shape as a bean instead of an hourglass
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Re: Hello I drew a thing.

Postby Strider » Mon Oct 19, 2015 1:57 pm

Thanks, that's quite helpful. I'll keep it in mind, much appreciated.
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