TheDarkDemon

not too bad! I like it.

http://i.imgur.com/aXGXl5F.jpg
some more sketchbook stuff. Feedback would be awesome, I still have a long way to go lol

also added a self portrait; it doesn't really capture the likeness but i guess it could be worse.

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some more sketchbook stuff. Feedback would be awesome, I still have a long way to go lol

some of the stuff is actually really good. Sure proportions might be off alittle, but you really tried to draw some decent lines and kept it clean.

i do like the hand and the girls most, especially that faceless one. Nice bodystructure. Practice makes perfect mah dude.

rest of sketchbook "2" time to start a new one for April. Not a lot of technical stuff here

You got some anatomy problems, so I duked out this that lays out the sections of the torso and how they look like. I took me a loonng fucking time to figure this out due to all the other "How to draw bodies" being super complicated. But yeah just watch for those sections of the body.

What makes a butt isn't 2 circles, it is actually 3 sections of the body that forms it.
The red portion (the stomach area),
the orange (the actual butt)
and the yellow portion (the thighs that go all the way to the top of the hips that actually is the one that forms most of the roundness).

I hope this hepls my man.

thanks for the feedback and the ref

You've got some cool sketches. My favorite is the self portrait, it looks like you spent the most time on that one. Like you I also find it somewhat difficult to criticize people's artwork. I feel like pushing my own style/habits on someone just constricts their creativity. I think the biggest thing that looks off in some of these are your proportions, but ZucchiniJuice gave some great advice on that already. It even helped me out, thanks ZucchiniJuice. Anyways I hope you share more with us in the future!

update of some of the stuff I did this month. I wish I worked harder/more this month.
http://i.imgur.com/BmuURFD.jpg
oh, and one of this is definitely not a study of some cropped hentai

edit: my tablet got here today so I've been trying to get used to it. really need to learn hands more though lol
http://i.imgur.com/94Mt3Kg.jpg

early may stuff; the arms and hands are pretty shit maybe i'll fix them sometime and color it.

What's most shocking to me is how she's able to handle that massive gun with only the trigger guard to hang onto

i can't into hands man


that's about as good as i can get it

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that's about as good as i can get it

idk it feels like she has really big arms and somehow the proportion seem to be off.
That is how i interpreted the lines.
I am sorry for drawing over your art here...

yeah the proportions are kinda off looking at it now. The further forearm is a good bit longer than the foreground forearm. And the further bicep might be slightly too short lengthwise. I also had trouble with making the arms look more delicate/less muscular. At least it's something I can learn from lol. Thanks for the input guys, I appreciate it.

http://i.imgur.com/tR4inYK.jpg
kind of a small update; some of the stuff i've done this month. Some stuff is still a work in progress