Ray's Art: Ben #2

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Re: Ray's Art: Rock Golem

Postby Daniël » Thu Nov 17, 2016 7:42 am

Rock Golem?
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Re: Ray's Art: Rock Golem

Postby KYROK » Sun Nov 20, 2016 12:42 am

This is high and pure quality, Draw moreeeee MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Re: Ray's Art: Rock Golem

Postby Raymond » Mon Nov 21, 2016 1:45 pm

Secretname911 wrote:Rock Golem?

Daniël wrote:Rock Golem?
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Lol I guess Rock Golem is a very broad name.

Thanks KYROK, I will continue to post more stuff here as I make it.
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Re: Ray's Art: Lauren Cohan

Postby Raymond » Wed Nov 23, 2016 5:02 pm

Lauren Cohan aka Maggie Greene from The Walking Dead.
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Re: Ray's Art: Lauren Cohan

Postby Jojishi » Sat Nov 26, 2016 5:23 pm

Wow man that's definitely an improvement. Facial structure feels right and it looks much better keeping the line thickness the same as the body. Only thing that looks like it could be improved are the breasts which don't have any perspective to them, and they're a bit circular looking. Have a look at a boob drawing tutorial lol.
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Re: Ray's Art: Andrew Lincoln

Postby Raymond » Tue Nov 29, 2016 3:57 pm

Thanks Jojishi, I still have a lot to learn. Here's another

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Re: Ray's Art: Anthony

Postby Raymond » Wed Dec 21, 2016 4:45 pm

I made a new one today.

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Re: Ray's Art: Carl

Postby Raymond » Thu Dec 22, 2016 5:50 pm

Here's another.

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Re: Ray's Art: Carl

Postby Clies » Thu Dec 22, 2016 6:26 pm

My favourites are the first, Ben, Lauren and this one. It's very good! the face looks right, and I like the folds.


Just one thing tho, when someone crosses their arms, the upper arms goes down at an angle, not straight down like you did, this made the fore arm way too large. This could have been prevented if you did that pose before drawing it (like doing a movement yourself when you are having problems in animation), good luck man.
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Re: Ray's Art: Carl

Postby kellawgs » Thu Dec 22, 2016 8:51 pm

These have a great style to them. I found myself eager to see the next one, all the way to the end.
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Re: Ray's Art: Carl

Postby Jojishi » Sat Dec 24, 2016 10:55 pm

Looking nice Raymond! The structure in these is much better lately. However, in the Anthony drawing the hand grabbing the towel looks a little small. :p

Also, can you please put all the drawings in your first post? That would be nice. :)
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Re: Ray's Art: Carl

Postby ZucchiniJuice » Wed Dec 28, 2016 6:59 am

Yeah putting all the drawings in the first post would be nice. The consistancy of style is very much there, but your recent one feels to have forced clothing folds. Theres usually that many clothing folds in soft clothing like that, but many of them pretty much cant be made in linework, only shading as such. Also, heres something I learned recently in my own drawing, at line meeting points, put darker, thicker lines there. You can try and experiement with that. I can definitely see your progress getting better as I scroll through. Nice job. Also, you going into something relating to art ray?

Honestly, I suck at any percise-detail cnc. I can do big picture ones cnc pretty good tho.
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Re: Ray's Art: Jennifer

Postby Raymond » Thu Jan 05, 2017 3:36 pm

Clies wrote:Just one thing tho, when someone crosses their arms, the upper arms goes down at an angle, not straight down like you did, this made the fore arm way too large. This could have been prevented if you did that pose before drawing it (like doing a movement yourself when you are having problems in animation), good luck man.

I'm worrying less about perfection and more about resemblance, but positioning is definitely something I need to work on.
kellawgs wrote:These have a great style to them. I found myself eager to see the next one, all the way to the end.

That means a lot dude. I'm glad you're still stopping by every so often. :)
Jojishi wrote:Also, can you please put all the drawings in your first post? That would be nice. :)

I'll do this now. Thanks Jojishi!
ZucchiniJuice wrote:Yeah putting all the drawings in the first post would be nice. The consistancy of style is very much there, but your recent one feels to have forced clothing folds. Theres usually that many clothing folds in soft clothing like that, but many of them pretty much cant be made in linework, only shading as such. Also, heres something I learned recently in my own drawing, at line meeting points, put darker, thicker lines there. You can try and experiement with that. I can definitely see your progress getting better as I scroll through. Nice job. Also, you going into something relating to art ray?
Thanks for the advice man. I've noticed I have trouble with clothing folds. It's hard to judge where they should go. I'll have to look up some tutorials on this.


My sister's been asking me to draw one of her, so here she is.

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Re: Ray's Art: Jennifer

Postby Blademaster » Thu Jan 19, 2017 7:20 am

really cute dude
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Re: Ray's Art: Luke & Jerry

Postby Raymond » Tue Jan 24, 2017 5:57 pm

Thanks man! I made 2 more.

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