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Re: Ray's Art: Rock Golem
Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2016 7:42 am
by Daniël
Rock Golem?
Re: Ray's Art: Rock Golem
Posted: Sun Nov 20, 2016 12:42 am
by KYROK
This is high and pure quality, Draw moreeeee MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Re: Ray's Art: Rock Golem
Posted: Mon Nov 21, 2016 1:45 pm
by Raymond
Daniël wrote:Rock Golem?
Lol I guess Rock Golem is a very broad name.
Thanks KYROK, I will continue to post more stuff here as I make it.
Re: Ray's Art: Lauren Cohan
Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2016 5:02 pm
by Raymond
Lauren Cohan aka Maggie Greene from The Walking Dead.
Re: Ray's Art: Lauren Cohan
Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2016 5:23 pm
by Jojishi
Wow man that's definitely an improvement. Facial structure feels right and it looks much better keeping the line thickness the same as the body. Only thing that looks like it could be improved are the breasts which don't have any perspective to them, and they're a bit circular looking. Have a look at a boob drawing tutorial lol.
Re: Ray's Art: Andrew Lincoln
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 3:57 pm
by Raymond
Thanks Jojishi, I still have a lot to learn. Here's another
Andrew Lincoln aka Rick Grimes from The Walking Dead.
Re: Ray's Art: Anthony
Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2016 4:45 pm
by Raymond
I made a new one today.
Anthony
Re: Ray's Art: Carl
Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 5:50 pm
by Raymond
Here's another.
Carl
Re: Ray's Art: Carl
Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 6:26 pm
by Clies
My favourites are the first, Ben, Lauren and this one. It's very good! the face looks right, and I like the folds.
Just one thing tho, when someone crosses their arms, the upper arms goes down at an angle, not straight down like you did, this made the fore arm way too large. This could have been prevented if you did that pose before drawing it (like doing a movement yourself when you are having problems in animation), good luck man.
Re: Ray's Art: Carl
Posted: Thu Dec 22, 2016 8:51 pm
by kellawgs
These have a great style to them. I found myself eager to see the next one, all the way to the end.
Re: Ray's Art: Carl
Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2016 10:55 pm
by Jojishi
Looking nice Raymond! The structure in these is much better lately. However, in the Anthony drawing the hand grabbing the towel looks a little small. :p
Also, can you please put all the drawings in your first post? That would be nice. :)
Re: Ray's Art: Carl
Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2016 6:59 am
by ZucchiniJuice
Yeah putting all the drawings in the first post would be nice. The consistancy of style is very much there, but your recent one feels to have forced clothing folds. Theres usually that many clothing folds in soft clothing like that, but many of them pretty much cant be made in linework, only shading as such. Also, heres something I learned recently in my own drawing, at line meeting points, put darker, thicker lines there. You can try and experiement with that. I can definitely see your progress getting better as I scroll through. Nice job. Also, you going into something relating to art ray?
Re: Ray's Art: Jennifer
Posted: Thu Jan 05, 2017 3:36 pm
by Raymond
Clies wrote:Just one thing tho, when someone crosses their arms, the upper arms goes down at an angle, not straight down like you did, this made the fore arm way too large. This could have been prevented if you did that pose before drawing it (like doing a movement yourself when you are having problems in animation), good luck man.
I'm worrying less about perfection and more about resemblance, but positioning is definitely something I need to work on.
kellawgs wrote:These have a great style to them. I found myself eager to see the next one, all the way to the end.
That means a lot dude. I'm glad you're still stopping by every so often. :)
Jojishi wrote:Also, can you please put all the drawings in your first post? That would be nice. :)
I'll do this now. Thanks Jojishi!
ZucchiniJuice wrote:Yeah putting all the drawings in the first post would be nice. The consistancy of style is very much there, but your recent one feels to have forced clothing folds. Theres usually that many clothing folds in soft clothing like that, but many of them pretty much cant be made in linework, only shading as such. Also, heres something I learned recently in my own drawing, at line meeting points, put darker, thicker lines there. You can try and experiement with that. I can definitely see your progress getting better as I scroll through. Nice job. Also, you going into something relating to art ray?
Thanks for the advice man. I've noticed I have trouble with clothing folds. It's hard to judge where they should go. I'll have to look up some tutorials on this.
My sister's been asking me to draw one of her, so here she is.
Jennifer
Re: Ray's Art: Jennifer
Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2017 7:20 am
by Blademaster
really cute dude
Re: Ray's Art: Luke & Jerry
Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2017 5:57 pm
by Raymond
Thanks man! I made 2 more.
Luke
Jerry