A serious poem.

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A serious poem.

Postby Aron » Sat Jan 31, 2015 9:16 pm


My previous masterpiece failed to entertain you, so I concocted another potion of words.
Bang.
Memories.
Bang.
Memories of you.
Bang.
Memories of you, branded into my mind, and I still feel the hot sting.
You had me from the start. I looked into your eyes and saw heaven.
You saw hell.
You cried and screamed and writhed in agony, yet I failed to respond.
I avoided you because of how much I wanted to be with you, and the irony pains my to this day.
Why didn't I speak up, when clearly you needed to talk?
Why didn't I walk over to you, when clearly you needed someone?
Why didn't I grab your hand, when clearly you were reaching out?
But it's too late now. You're gone.
And it's all. My. Fault.

This poem is a true story. When I was 12 or 13, the girl I had a crush on committed suicide, and I thought for a long time it was because I had avoided her.
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Llama » Sat Jan 31, 2015 11:49 pm

...

Can we please go back to that wonderland of a poem you posted before? This is too much.
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Anton » Sat Jan 31, 2015 11:54 pm

Hm, the emotional strategy now ? Works for me ... i'm nearly crying.

btw i see no point of making a new thread when there's the mood thread to confess things like these.


I reckon a poem would be more fit in the actual literature section than in there.
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Aron » Sun Feb 01, 2015 11:15 am

LlamaPIVOT wrote:...

Can we please go back to that wonderland of a poem you posted before? This is too much.

That thread got locked, but you can just go back and read it again if you want to.
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Lord » Sun Feb 01, 2015 1:52 pm

Wow, this is powerful. Did it affect you that much?
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Aron » Sun Feb 01, 2015 4:09 pm

LordPivot wrote:Wow, this is powerful. Did it affect you that much?

I felt really guilty, but I'm over it now. (thumbsup
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby lordkazari » Sun Jun 07, 2015 5:15 pm

wow this is really deep (cry (cry (cry (cry (cry

please write more the feels im recieving rite now are really powerful
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Anton » Sun Jun 07, 2015 5:22 pm

lordkazari wrote:wow this is really deep (cry (cry (cry (cry (cry

please write more the feels im recieving rite now are really powerful
Oh look, a 4 months bump. "rite" here. (neutral
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Franklin » Mon Jun 08, 2015 2:38 pm

lordkazari wrote:wow this is really deep (cry (cry (cry (cry (cry

please write more the feels im recieving rite now are really powerful

Yeah, Aron, experience another traumatic event so that this guy can get more feels.
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Re: A serious poem.

Postby Lawn Feed » Tue Jun 09, 2015 6:43 pm

this is very promising literature...
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