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Well, here's the intro to a paper I'm working on. Need this to go well and I know a few of you write, so any input/criticism would be lovely. Too wordy, lacks description, etc. I appreciate anyone who takes the time. Danke.
"All monumental strides taken in the history of humanity have begun with the infamous feline killer: relentless curiosity. This inquisitive wonder we all share has been the foundation for a plethora of prominent and awe-inspiring discoveries over the centuries. Many of these once buried enigmas have been wrenched out of the sediment through experimentation. More specifically in this instance, the scrutiny of the psychological and neurological complex of the human individual. The relatively sophisticated anthropoids that we are have utilized the tools at our disposal to extract perplexing anomalies from the core of intertwined nerves referred to as the brain. From the notorious “Little Albert” experiment that brought an understanding of classical conditioning to a brighter light, to the innocent Asch Conformity studies that expanded our knowledge of deviancy, or lack thereof. However, research efforts of this degree are now unfortunately being contested of their ethical standards. Some of these restrictions on experimentation only hinder vital progress that could be made otherwise."
