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Jojishi wrote:That is an awesome animation with a meaningful and heartfelt message. I like it a lot. :)
On the first scene, it was quite professional with the song playing as the camera angle panned down and established the setting. The next scene was nice, but could have had more impact if you showed a close-up of what was being said on the computer screen. When the main character is walking, he goes up and down suddenly when he walks on/off the path in a "video-gamey" way. Instead of using a walk cycle and moving the character up/down, it might be better to animate the character stepping because it doesn't look as natural as it could. When the bin was kicked it didn't have much weight to it when it fell, when it could have moved faster to feel heavier.
One part that stood out was easily when the character walked into that area and looked up at the huge Christmas tree towering over him. That high-angle looking down on the character easily gets across the sombre tone you were going for, as well as him seeming isolated. The length of the shot also helps, plus there was lots of emotion in that slouched walk.
Anyway, I liked this a lot FireBind. I hope you find my comment helpful, and I'd like to see more from you in the future.
Defalt wrote:I like it
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