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Duelist demo

Postby Blademaster » Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:33 am

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Re: Duelist demo

Postby tuna » Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:54 am

hey man looks awesome. i think duellist demos have to be at least 30 seconds long though. this looks about 20 seconds

but yea, your form, timing, choreography etc is awesome. i think you would benefit from making the linework cleaner though, its kinda hard to pick out the features of your character because its so messy. again, great movements and form, linework makes it a chore to pick out whats going on with the character half the time. as an animator you make it your job to make sure the audience knows what theyre looking at without having to re-watch and concentrate hard.
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Re: Duelist demo

Postby Pivot Gamer » Sat Jan 06, 2018 7:37 am

The start looks like.... when your girlfriend say that she is alone in home.
about the anim, its awesome xD
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Re: Duelist demo

Postby StevenRZ » Sat Jan 06, 2018 4:20 pm

Woow man is incredible (scared
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Re: Duelist demo

Postby Massive Legend » Sat Jan 06, 2018 5:33 pm

looks dope
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Re: Duelist demo

Postby Blademaster » Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:29 am

tuna wrote:hey man looks awesome. i think duellist demos have to be at least 30 seconds long though. this looks about 20 seconds

but yea, your form, timing, choreography etc is awesome. i think you would benefit from making the linework cleaner though, its kinda hard to pick out the features of your character because its so messy. again, great movements and form, linework makes it a chore to pick out whats going on with the character half the time. as an animator you make it your job to make sure the audience knows what theyre looking at without having to re-watch and concentrate hard.

yeah, I probably will not finish it as duelist demo. Something came inbetween so I gotta scrap it.

I agree a lot to this. Thanks Tuna
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Re: Duelist demo

Postby tuna » Sun Jan 07, 2018 1:08 pm

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Re: Duelist demo

Postby Raymond » Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:18 pm

Holy shit man you just keep on improving! I'm hoping that one day I can see an anime and see your name at the end of the credits!
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Re: Duelist demo

Postby Blademaster » Sun Jan 07, 2018 11:18 pm

Raymond wrote:Holy shit man you just keep on improving! I'm hoping that one day I can see an anime and see your name at the end of the credits!

This day is closer than u think.
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