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Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:33 am
by Blademaster
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Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:54 am
by tuna
hey man looks awesome. i think duellist demos have to be at least 30 seconds long though. this looks about 20 seconds

but yea, your form, timing, choreography etc is awesome. i think you would benefit from making the linework cleaner though, its kinda hard to pick out the features of your character because its so messy. again, great movements and form, linework makes it a chore to pick out whats going on with the character half the time. as an animator you make it your job to make sure the audience knows what theyre looking at without having to re-watch and concentrate hard.

Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 7:37 am
by Pivot Gamer
The start looks like.... when your girlfriend say that she is alone in home.
about the anim, its awesome xD

Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 4:20 pm
by StevenRZ
Woow man is incredible (scared

Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 5:33 pm
by Massive Legend
looks dope

Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:29 am
by Blademaster
tuna wrote:hey man looks awesome. i think duellist demos have to be at least 30 seconds long though. this looks about 20 seconds

but yea, your form, timing, choreography etc is awesome. i think you would benefit from making the linework cleaner though, its kinda hard to pick out the features of your character because its so messy. again, great movements and form, linework makes it a chore to pick out whats going on with the character half the time. as an animator you make it your job to make sure the audience knows what theyre looking at without having to re-watch and concentrate hard.

yeah, I probably will not finish it as duelist demo. Something came inbetween so I gotta scrap it.

I agree a lot to this. Thanks Tuna

Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 1:08 pm
by tuna
np

Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:18 pm
by Raymond
Holy shit man you just keep on improving! I'm hoping that one day I can see an anime and see your name at the end of the credits!

Re: Duelist demo

PostPosted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 11:18 pm
by Blademaster
Raymond wrote:Holy shit man you just keep on improving! I'm hoping that one day I can see an anime and see your name at the end of the credits!

This day is closer than u think.
Things happend. I won't tell more.