Duelist demo
Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:33 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:33 amRe: Duelist demo
Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 6:54 amhey man looks awesome. i think duellist demos have to be at least 30 seconds long though. this looks about 20 seconds
but yea, your form, timing, choreography etc is awesome. i think you would benefit from making the linework cleaner though, its kinda hard to pick out the features of your character because its so messy. again, great movements and form, linework makes it a chore to pick out whats going on with the character half the time. as an animator you make it your job to make sure the audience knows what theyre looking at without having to re-watch and concentrate hard.
but yea, your form, timing, choreography etc is awesome. i think you would benefit from making the linework cleaner though, its kinda hard to pick out the features of your character because its so messy. again, great movements and form, linework makes it a chore to pick out whats going on with the character half the time. as an animator you make it your job to make sure the audience knows what theyre looking at without having to re-watch and concentrate hard.
Re: Duelist demo
Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 7:37 amThe start looks like.... when your girlfriend say that she is alone in home.
about the anim, its awesome xD
about the anim, its awesome xD
Re: Duelist demo
Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 4:20 pmWoow man is incredible 
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Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2018 5:33 pmlooks dope
Re: Duelist demo
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:29 amtuna wrote:hey man looks awesome. i think duellist demos have to be at least 30 seconds long though. this looks about 20 seconds
but yea, your form, timing, choreography etc is awesome. i think you would benefit from making the linework cleaner though, its kinda hard to pick out the features of your character because its so messy. again, great movements and form, linework makes it a chore to pick out whats going on with the character half the time. as an animator you make it your job to make sure the audience knows what theyre looking at without having to re-watch and concentrate hard.
yeah, I probably will not finish it as duelist demo. Something came inbetween so I gotta scrap it.
I agree a lot to this. Thanks Tuna
Re: Duelist demo
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 1:08 pmnp
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:18 pmHoly shit man you just keep on improving! I'm hoping that one day I can see an anime and see your name at the end of the credits!
Re: Duelist demo
Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2018 11:18 pmRaymond wrote:Holy shit man you just keep on improving! I'm hoping that one day I can see an anime and see your name at the end of the credits!
This day is closer than u think.
Things happend. I won't tell more.