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Mega punch test

Postby TheLegendV » Tue Dec 16, 2014 5:41 am

Hey i just did a mega punch test using flash..

here's the link to the animation: http://sta.sh/0247kfxdobha

i hope you guys like it :)
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Re: Mega punch test

Postby Gary » Tue Dec 16, 2014 7:52 pm

Alrighty so, with the movements, you should try to be a lot more smoother, and flowing with your movements. Basically, you want your movements to be linked together so it doesn't look like he basically just instantly moved into a movement. All you've got to do is add more frames with poses and it'll look better. Also, I do not understand why the animation area is so small, and contained in a box. I'll just assumed you messed up the dimension size or vcam, but try to keep that at a normal size. Finally, the effect wasn't that great. It went by really fast, and you can't really tell what just happened with it.

But work on fixing this stuff and you'll be fine
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Re: Mega punch test

Postby TheLegendV » Tue Dec 16, 2014 11:54 pm

Gary wrote:Alrighty so, with the movements, you should try to be a lot more smoother, and flowing with your movements. Basically, you want your movements to be linked together so it doesn't look like he basically just instantly moved into a movement. All you've got to do is add more frames with poses and it'll look better. Also, I do not understand why the animation area is so small, and contained in a box. I'll just assumed you messed up the dimension size or vcam, but try to keep that at a normal size. Finally, the effect wasn't that great. It went by really fast, and you can't really tell what just happened with it.

But work on fixing this stuff and you'll be fine



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Re: Mega punch test

Postby wondermeow » Tue Jan 06, 2015 12:18 am

HI Mate,

Good stuff Im pretty sure over time you are going to submit some really awesome animation keep it up mate.

Off topic Im also really new here and having trouble submitting videos or URL links, Im sure what Im doing someting wrong can you give some instruction to teach me, cheers.

Kind regards,

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