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Drakus wrote:A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?Spoiler:
TheDucker1 wrote:Drakus wrote:A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?Spoiler:
wow, cool animation :)
but i think this need more weight, and his hands(?, or front legs??) is a little shaky and stiff
his mouth was stop for a moment went he's about to roar and his head is a little choppy too
Blademaster wrote:Yo, the roar kinda lacks in power/impact. Also the timing seems to be off. He should've had his mouth closed until the point he goes for the roar. Maybe let him lean back a bit and then release the roar within 1-2 frames. Like he'd charge up and then pumps it out. If he charges the roar, it will have some more anticipation.
His jaw should kinda vibrate while roaring (idk how to explain). Maybe add some substitle effect like particles/liquid/shockwave.
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Xeroz wrote:
Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?
Xeroz wrote:
Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?
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