Beginner Animation Chat/ Showoff [01]

[Drakus]

A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?

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[Meh]

A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?

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wow, cool animation :)
but i think this need more weight, and his hands(?, or front legs??) is a little shaky and stiff
his mouth was stop for a moment went he's about to roar and his head is a little choppy too

[Drakus]

A Gigasaur Roaring what do you guys think?

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wow, cool animation :)
but i think this need more weight, and his hands(?, or front legs??) is a little shaky and stiff
his mouth was stop for a moment went he's about to roar and his head is a little choppy too

Alright I tried fixing up the arm movement. But he's just lunging to roar this one, not really stomping.

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[Blademaster]

Yo, the roar kinda lacks in power/impact. Also the timing seems to be off. He should've had his mouth closed until the point he goes for the roar. Maybe let him lean back a bit and then release the roar within 1-2 frames. Like he'd charge up and then pumps it out. If he charges the roar, it will have some more anticipation.
His jaw should kinda vibrate while roaring (idk how to explain). Maybe add some substitle effect like particles/liquid/shockwave.

[Drakus]

Yo, the roar kinda lacks in power/impact. Also the timing seems to be off. He should've had his mouth closed until the point he goes for the roar. Maybe let him lean back a bit and then release the roar within 1-2 frames. Like he'd charge up and then pumps it out. If he charges the roar, it will have some more anticipation.
His jaw should kinda vibrate while roaring (idk how to explain). Maybe add some substitle effect like particles/liquid/shockwave.

Alright, this is rather a warning roar so I didn't make him lean back.
There'll be sounds and some external effects added to the roar.
But I've managed to fix the gaping jaw:

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[Drakus]

1st Time attempting a punch like this, as well with the bouncing flow.
I'm wide open for honest criticism.

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[Cristiano123]

Hi guys, how do I send my animations?

[yungdissy]

Hey, you're pretty good

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[Drakus]

Hey, you're pretty good

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I legit can't stop bobbing my head to this. It sounds something like a beat for a rap dude. Lmao

[yungdissy]

Hell yeah pimp

[Roxer7]

Imgur kinda sped em up but please tell me what you think
http://imgur.com/Fm2IM9U
http://imgur.com/zVOWEod

[Xeroz]

Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?

[Blademaster]

Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?

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[Alexis]

Alright, so...
I tried to make a speedy-hits animation amd although I'm somewhat happy with the result, I'm also somewhat unhappy with it at the same time.
I'm pretty sure I didn't execute any of the fundamentals right, but at the same time, I'm not sure how to fix them.
Hence, I came here. How can I make this better?

eyo its nice to see you still animating xer! and like i heard somewhere that in order to make a punch look powerful, the foot doesn't have to go stomp forward if the punch is going forward per se, but in like the front foot should be kept stumped when the punch is being charged and hitting

[farzad1382]

Hello :)