by The Black Mamba » Tue Jul 08, 2014 8:45 pm
I don't think that was a fail at all, just needs a little tweaking. I really like the scenery in this one along with most your other animations. That's what always stood out to me when watching your stuff. You've improved quite a bit compared to your last animation, I can tell you've been practicing. I like the camera angles you incorporated, but I would hold off on those until you refine your movements a little more or you could have refined them and I can't even tell cause the 3D is a little fast. You should add more to the end so I could see how your movements are coming along. I mainly like the first one better cause of what you attempted, though you should still put a hold on that stuff till your movements improve. I think you should continue this and see where it goes, good luck.