That attack move looks absolutely awesome. Very complicated, but you pulled it off nicely. Your style is very reminiscent of Cressel's, in the sense that your poses display a lot of power. I like how you've got a smooth touch to it though. A joint between you two could be pretty cool.
The last part was really icky: How could someone remain still without losing balance while at such a pose? Moreover, the spacing was plain dead. As for the lightning,try to distort it to give it a better feel. Otherwise, it was rather cool.