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p6 - (Work in Pr.) Clusive Vs. Anti-Clusive #2

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p5 - Ball Dodge 1
http://animtube.net/index.php?view=detail&id=485&option=com_joomgallery&Itemid=318


p4 - Clusive Vs. Anti-Clusive #1 (... some of it got cut off on here so check it out on animtube)
http://animtube.net/index.php?view=detail&id=453&option=com_joomgallery&Itemid=318

p3 - Clusive Vs. Anti-Clusive

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p2 - leaping kick, or whatever (some of the screen got cut off or something. meh.)

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p1 - kamehameha

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I messed up on the blue guy badly. I tried to fix it but I just got too tired, it's almost midnight here

[Grams]

Shouldn't be embarrassed at all. Pretty gnarly for beginner. This looks better than half of my crap :P
Only two noticeable critiques:
1. Work on camera movement. I'm actually surprised to see this much dynamic in camera movement for a first (applause), but it looks a bit awkward and doesn't flow too well. But, nothing big. Just practice.
2. When he lands the jump and just starts to run, one of the legs kicks back too quickly, so the run doesn't look eased into (unnatural).
Pretty good otherwise. Keep it up! :D

[Lord]

You have some of the core concepts down, I'm just thinking you need more easing and smoothness, it's just a matter of building up on what you already know (which is quite a lot for a beginner)

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one of the things i've been working on lately;

messed up in a few spots - meh

[STIKY55]

I really like your style. These ani's are med beginner right now, but i think it will just take practice to get them where you really want them. Also try editing those sticks to make them a bit cleaner so there are no holes in your fills. Also You definitely want to practice practice practice on those physics. I don't have them all the way down myself, but since you have decent movements you should start looking to really make your models and movements as physically accurate as possible.

[FlamingSosej2732]

I see that you're an effects guy! Your effects are very decent!

[EpicPerry]

in my oppinion your animations arent bad at all!
but you should work a little bit on the movements though.
and keep working with those effects!