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FourAcross Thread: Ghost Sword

Postby Four » Sun Aug 03, 2014 6:02 am

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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Lord » Sun Aug 03, 2014 6:12 am

Not much to say really. Here's everything I can say about it...

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Hope that helps!
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby kellawgs » Sun Aug 03, 2014 8:16 am

Your run loop is incredibly stiff looking and the poses could be greatly improved.

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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Four » Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:37 pm

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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Koolcid » Sun Sep 14, 2014 1:10 pm

That looks pretty good to me, nothing much going on, everything was spot on you couldn't really screw an animation like that, though lol.
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby The Black Mamba » Mon Sep 15, 2014 12:19 am

Well, that was a nice little loop. Nice display of physics in the rope pole thing, could use a couple more wobbles toward the end. You animate shorts only, so there isn't much to go off of. You seem pretty smooth, I'd say work more on your flow.
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Chris » Mon Sep 15, 2014 7:10 am

That seems to be the only thing you need to work on for right now, but these animations are interesting! Looking forward to seeing more of your animations
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Four » Mon Sep 15, 2014 9:49 am

Thanks guys.
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby STIKY55 » Mon Sep 15, 2014 7:45 pm

Your animations are certainly good starts, but I think you should A) provide some slightly longer bits so that you can really showcase your talent and B) work on easing and making the movements smooth. All of the limbs have to support the movements of other limbs. Moving your arm requires your head and back to move a bit and vice versa. Med Begginer Id say.
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Mori » Tue Sep 16, 2014 7:28 am

coool (smile
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Four » Sun Sep 28, 2014 2:19 am

Update: Randomness, Inspired by the PA chats reaction to my username colour change on PA.
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Mori » Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:54 am

you do have shared your entry to my collab in PA thanks
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Four » Sun Sep 28, 2014 6:04 am

Elite44 wrote:you do have shared your entry to my collab in PA thanks

What? Is this English?
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby FlamingSosej2732 » Thu Oct 02, 2014 6:56 pm

The run was pretty realistic! I loved it!
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Re: FourAcross thread

Postby Ussay » Thu Oct 09, 2014 1:43 pm

Nice animations bro, that run loop is pretty cool, you should finish the movements in your animations, you seem to know what you're doing but I would love to see longer animations from you </3
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