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Re: I made another comic (30/9)

Postby .Gage » Tue Sep 30, 2014 5:19 am

Why is he sliding into a printer? Also fix the text, I could barely read it
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Re: I made another comic (30/9)

Postby SIFTER » Tue Sep 30, 2014 5:23 am

He fell from a futuristic space ship to the sea and blame poverty and the stores for the lack of good inking materials. I also based that poor space ship design on this to keep consistency. I should number the panels next time.
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Re: I made another comic (30/9)

Postby Mat » Tue Sep 30, 2014 6:40 am

you based it off a blurry rectangular prism? Good job.
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Re: I made another comic (30/9)

Postby Jojishi » Wed Oct 01, 2014 1:38 am

I think you're still improving a lot. I liked the 2nd comic. The 3rd comic looks nice, but I think a panel showing the splash would help it look better.
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Re: I made another comic (30/9)

Postby Waters » Wed Oct 01, 2014 2:30 am

I liked the first panel, mainly the hand, and the panel where he falls. Even though you shouldn't have cut off the right leg, it looks half assed. And that head looking up is abysmal man. Try looking up some reference for that.
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Re: "oh god no. he drew again???" (13/01)

Postby SIFTER » Tue Jan 13, 2015 6:47 am

So, I got the balls to show a very few of the tens of drawings I draw now.
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Re: "oh god no. he drew again???" (13/01)

Postby Coweetie » Tue Jan 13, 2015 7:46 am

I really like your style, and I think you improved alot, compared to your older drawings. (thumbsup
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Re: "oh god no. he drew again???" (13/01)

Postby Phewz » Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:38 am

speaking candidly, your poses are really stiff and as a result your style lacks a lot of personality
i feel like you don't really understand the concept of gesture which would explain why your drawings are really stiff, so i would seriously recommend watching the videos i'll post below and doing some gesture practice
it'll really help you breathe some life into your drawings

these videos are your friends:
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8j39NqwL7s4
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Re: "oh god no. he drew again???" (13/01)

Postby SIFTER » Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:50 pm

Now I can see the stiffness in my drawings. Thank you so much for your criticism. I'll make sure to practice smarter.
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Re: "oh god no. he drew again???" (13/01)

Postby SIFTER » Fri May 08, 2015 2:20 pm

*sigh* I know I'm gonna regret posting this here ಠ_ಠ, but yolo, so here it is.
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Re: i arted again

Postby socks » Fri May 08, 2015 6:11 pm

They look incredibly stiff, you should work on that for the newer female poses. And the anatomy seems to be off on sizing and positions.
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Re: i arted again

Postby SIFTER » Fri May 08, 2015 6:43 pm

And here you are not paying attention to the latest post. Not edit, but post. The one that is exactly on top of this very reply. Do you see it? Yeah that's the one, enjoy yourself.
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Re: i arted again

Postby socks » Fri May 08, 2015 7:16 pm

Sifter wrote:And here you are not paying attention to the latest post. Not edit, but post. The one that is exactly on top of this very reply. Do you see it? Yeah that's the one, enjoy yourself.

Well if you want to be a direct asshole about it, feel free to. I chose to give my advice on how to make the poses on your second most recent works better, i had nothing to contribute about the other thing you did so i didn't. If you don't want someone to comment on your older works, remove them you mook. They are also two entirely different subjects of drawing, one a head and hand study. The other being a pose study.
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Re: i arted again (check last page, last post)

Postby Coweetie » Fri May 08, 2015 11:08 pm

I really like that new one, it has some style. Also these hands look really neat!
The form of the head is made well though, and the angle quite good, I know that that one is pretty hard to make.

and it might be good if you edit it into the new post so people can see it there instead of searching for the new one in the newest posts. :)
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Re: Sifter | Illustration and Design

Postby SIFTER » Sun Sep 10, 2017 10:53 pm

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Updated with most recent work. Check OP.
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