by Raymond » Sat Jan 03, 2015 6:44 pm
I really like the new one man. There is a lot of power in it.
The second one listed is great. The length is nice and the movements/effects look good. I know it's a joint so part of it isn't yours, but you both did great. Your styles are very similar. I loved your use of the camera in this one. You had it rotate around the characters in one scene, which I know is difficult to do. I also liked how you would zoom out for some parts, to show just how much destruction was being caused by them fighting. It's things like that which top of an animation in my opinion.
It would take me forever to comment on all of these, but the majority of them look good. Your movements are smooth and I like that your practicing with the camera a lot. Your on your way to intermediate. I'm a little surprised you aren't there yet, but one more animation should do it. If you really want intermediate I would suggest branching out from DBZ a little more. I know you can add realistic movements to DBZ characters, but try making something more original. Something that defines you. It will get you there faster.