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[Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Skyline » Sat Jan 17, 2015 7:35 am

Hello. I'm a new pivot animator looking for improvement. Give as much CC as you can.
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Shadow Sift (Inspired by Shadow Lith, credits to Sifter for base)
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Re: [Quake] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Madnessthunder » Sat Jan 17, 2015 8:03 am

Not bad, just need to work on easing more, the run is really fast and the motions could use a bit more fluidyness
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Re: [Quake] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Skyline » Sat Jan 17, 2015 1:36 pm

MadnessThunder wrote:Not bad, just need to work on easing more, the run is really fast and the motions could use a bit more fluidyness

Thanks. I will ease more and use a slower pace on my next animation.
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Skyline » Sat Jan 17, 2015 7:37 pm

Bumpdate.
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Anton » Sat Jan 17, 2015 9:20 pm

I think you'll improve much more if you were about to make a long animation.

For now, I'll only point out the obvious :
-Shakyness,
-Stop & Go

These flaws will fade out with practise.
At least you know where to ease and where not to ease, so that's pretty good for the beginning.
Also, the tremor in quake is too strong, it harms the quality of the animation.
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Waters » Sat Jan 17, 2015 10:35 pm

Try focusing more on keeping your movements consistent. They should always be flowing into eachother and rarely stopping completely. It helps to just add more frames to your movements.
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Franklin » Sun Jan 18, 2015 1:30 pm

I really like the energy of your animations, though they could be a lot better without the stop and go.
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Extra » Mon Jan 19, 2015 6:10 pm

Hey Skyline, I might be really wrong here, but did you use the name Power or Flow back in the day?
Anyways, nice animations dude!
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Daniël » Mon Jan 19, 2015 6:12 pm

Extra wrote:Hey Skyline, I might be really wrong here, but did you use the name Power or Flow back in the day?
Anyways, nice animations dude!

If you did, I remember you.

But I'm also not entirely sure was Extra is basing this assumption on.
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Extra » Mon Jan 19, 2015 6:31 pm

After Power switched his name to Flow, he changed it to Skyline, atleast, thats what his Youtube says.
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Re: [Shadow Sift] - Skyline's Thread

Postby Skyline » Tue Jan 20, 2015 8:07 am

Extra wrote:Hey Skyline, I might be really wrong here, but did you use the name Power or Flow back in the day?
Anyways, nice animations dude!

Nope, sorry.
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