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Biscuit wrote:The animation is really smooth and the poses were fantastic. The first punch looked really weak for that kind of reaction tho. That was my only concern about that animation
Anton wrote:This is the way towards progress. This is what I found in terms of flaws :
-Choppiness in the arms
-Balance issues.
-The legs snap in the first punch, they shouldn't. Keep them smooth except when you're making a kick.
-Also, the angle of the build-up on the last punch is pretty small, bluestick has not enough room to charge a really powerful punch, but he does, by looking at redstick's reaction.
And i personally suggest a slighty slower timing, like 1 or 2 more frame in between punches.
Mori wrote:I tried to make that stand a long time but I always fail, you really did a great job man keep it up!
MadnessThunder wrote:Mori wrote:I tried to make that stand a long time but I always fail, you really did a great job man keep it up!
What do you mean by the stand?
Mori wrote:MadnessThunder wrote:Mori wrote:I tried to make that stand a long time but I always fail, you really did a great job man keep it up!
What do you mean by the stand?
When he gets up.
Root wrote:For the wings test:
- There is a bit of choppiness as he gets up from his crouch.
- I'd make him rise faster as his wings beat downwards, and fall a bit as his wings rise back up.
- There is a moment of large shakiness as he flies away.
- You should probably make him ease into flying away more.
- There is a lot of stiffness- you should probably make him sway more while he is in the air.
Anton wrote:I saw the poll and immediately voted swords. xD
Remember that i still have an anvil at anyone's service.
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