by Alca » Sat Aug 01, 2015 4:12 am
Uh, in the first song several of the notes don't even sound like they're in the same key as the backing track, e.g. 0:27. The melody isn't going anywhere either, just sounds like you hit random notes. It's not bad for your first song but there's no progression or anything. Also the backing track only really uses three chords or so with no variation at all, so musically it's very bland. It's not the worst I've heard, but I'd suggest learning music theory if you want to make any progress.
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