Hi.
Here's some stuff I did these past months -
NEW
http://sta.sh/01p9tronon3n - stabby stabby
http://sta.sh/01soz7bwz2e2 - hitty hitty
http://sta.sh/0qjgznz700m - idk what i was on when i made this lmao
http://sta.sh/01yq3cz5625u - i cant exagerrate for shit
http://sta.sh/02a7m4dxfev0 - rushed cinematic
http://sta.sh/0ez3r8sugmk - kinda old project i will never finish because i fucked up the 'skeletons', so ignore the fullbody part
http://sta.sh/09c678tud76 - another slightly longer old project i will never finish because i hate the style and im lazy
OLD
http://sta.sh/02e9f546wsgs -fake intro i did for no reason
http://sta.sh/024gyg8ryd20 -boring sitckfigure thing
http://sta.sh/020j5k102ky0 -boring stickfigure thing with sounds
http://sta.sh/01yatq3z1bg3 -this is literally 3 seconds
http://sta.sh/022wxr3uduoz -this is literally 3 seconds longer than the above
http://sta.sh/0ssgsnbylf3 -i do different styles hehe
http://sta.sh/0hheugmv9p4 - this might be the longest thing ive ever done
I appreciate any critisism.
Thanks!
Elipter's Flash Thing [UPDATED AS OF 6/1/16]
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Elipter's Flash Thing [UPDATED AS OF 6/1/16]
Last edited by Elipter on Sat Jul 02, 2016 12:17 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Elipter's Flash Thing
Damn... this one just keeps going and going. You really went to town on this one.
You're really good at linking different combos together. And your attacks look really quick and powerful. Maybe it's the way you quickly recoil the attacks, but they look pretty strong to me. I guess if you want CC, you could work on accentuating a couple hits. You've got so many fast attacks going on it gets rather dull watching a longer animation of it. Try making an attack with a longer recoil time. Show the release of all that built up momentum after a couple quick jabs.
It would be cool to see what other aspects you excel in, besides fighting. Although if you enjoy animating combos, then don't let me stop you.
You're really good at linking different combos together. And your attacks look really quick and powerful. Maybe it's the way you quickly recoil the attacks, but they look pretty strong to me. I guess if you want CC, you could work on accentuating a couple hits. You've got so many fast attacks going on it gets rather dull watching a longer animation of it. Try making an attack with a longer recoil time. Show the release of all that built up momentum after a couple quick jabs.
It would be cool to see what other aspects you excel in, besides fighting. Although if you enjoy animating combos, then don't let me stop you.
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Re: Elipter's Flash Thing
Reminds me of Tol, some of it was slightly repetitive but the movements were on point.
Re: Elipter's Flash Thing
Yeah, I totally agree. For that one I actually got bored of animating it lol, but I pushed myself to make something a little longer and see what kinds of combos I could come up with and chain together. I was also trying a different style to see whether it would stick, and for this one the only way you'd be able to see any of the attacks is with a shit ton of recoil. Exaggeration is definately something I need to work on though, and I guess it kinda comes hand in hand with easing and momentum...
Thanks you two, Ill be sure to work on it. Really liking this site so far too. ^u^
Thanks you two, Ill be sure to work on it. Really liking this site so far too. ^u^
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Re: Elipter's Flash Thing
Hah. I like his style man. Reminds me so much of myself.Kermit wrote:Reminds me of Tol, some of it was slightly repetitive but the movements were on point.