Hitman's Thread

[Hitman]

Hey the names Hitman, Welcome to my thread check out my animations, feel free
to CC and stuff ok.

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I joined TheDarkDemon on Wednesday,30th April 2016. I hope I can improve and get to intermediate
please help me on my endevours XD.

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Random shit

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Idiot

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Tora

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Centered Origin

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Weapon Practice

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My Miscreants Tryout

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My RS tryout

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Combo try 5

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Sword try 2
Blademaster helped me with this one, Thnx bro

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Combo try 4

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Combo try 3

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Sword try

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Combo try 2

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I'm just saiyan

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Kick combo

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Combo try

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Run loop

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I dont think I'm gonna finish this

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Baseball

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SUPER PUNCH!!!

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Look at the flick of the wrist

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I call it...GIANT

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Im turning a new leaf, gonna try harder this time

[Hitman]

This one too
not half bad if ryt

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[Raymond]

You have some spacing issues, and things get pretty stiff at times, but god damn those were entertaining.

[Hitman]

OK, so spacing and stiffness, thats some good advice
i ll work on it

[DostPs]

the last one was sick but lacked of animation basics,good luck!

[Hitman]

Ok, Alright

[Finom]

Mate, my thread has less replies as you though that's partially my fault, and I've been in this community way longer, but that's besides the point.
Before you ask for any CC also known as Constructive Criticism, you might want to read some tutorials we have, as they greatly help with the very basics as you're obviously very new to this.

[Clies]

Man you really have good ideas of action scenes even when they look shaky and stiff, you have potential, I'd love to see more of your stuff when you learn more about the basics, I'm actually hyped.

[Hitman]

[Gouenji32]

So hello ! If i can give you a cc it's maybe on the baseball one first : you got some spacing issues and the way the baseball bat come is a bit not realistic cauz go see some references of poses of a baseball player. Then the movement lacks of spacing and in doing so it's like the bat is kinda heavy and the ball is also heavy. And when the baat hit the ball it should not be eased you need to make a big spacing to make it like snap (don't know if you understand i can make an anim and show ya ) !
And about the run : the torso should be on the same line as the backward leg because in real life you not run like this naturally... Moreover the movements are stiff you need to move every joint in every frame. So the head, the hands, the legs, the torso !
That's all i can say ^_^

[Hitman]

Update bro's

Thanks Blademaster



I make a lot of combo's in my free time xD

[Setto]

Hitman holy crap you just MEGA JUMPED
anyways at the end of the combo I think the stick was a little stiff but its good
The sword anim looks good too

[Hitman]

Thanks man,
I'm a fast learner y'know
thanks for the praises
And the combo does look a little stiff,
I'll fix that.

[Gouenji32]

Yea the combo is stiff such as the last pose ^^ Try to move every part and dots of the stick ^^ The ideas seem to be really good and you got a little inconsistent spacing ^^
Tho you're really good since your last combo ! Keep ut the great work

[Hitman]

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