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Hey I used to be a member from 2006-2008, and I came back last year and animated some. Getting back into pivot; if anyone remembers me hey lol.

CC's appreciated

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Obstacle Course 2 Entry

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Was going to be a joint with Elixir, but it failed

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By Year

2016

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Day 4

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Routine Check-up Failed

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Break Loop

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1 vs Many

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Choice (Failed)

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Box Run

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beginner: June 2006
inter: 2007
beginner: 2015

[AnimationWizard]

not to bad man, when he falls the gravity seems to increase immensly, and his body freezes, and his spine looks a little loose
and your easing could use a bit more practice

[Outdated]

not to bad man, when he falls the gravity seems to increase immensly, and his body freezes, and his spine looks a little loose
and your easing could use a bit more practice

Thanks for the cc, I'll try to improve

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[elixir]

that slow mo part was sick

[Hydrogenex]

Damn, i was not expecting that bone to pop out, jeez, that was damn good

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thanks guys, also there's a poll now

[AnimationWizard]

id say high beg, the slow mo was excellent but still had a little slowness to it, keep it up bro

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[Raymond]

Holy shit that was awesome! Great job on the water effects! And I like how it loops. :)

[Clies]

You gotta work on those swimming movements it looked like you rushed to get that part done, take your time :)

The animation is very creative tho, good job!

[Setto]

The swimming could be better, like clies said. besides that i dont see much wrong with it, looks nice
It wasnt the most polished amazing thing but i personally really liked the water effect o3o

[AnimationWizard]

the water was great lol the swimming was a bit wonky

[elixir]

you still have a long ways to go, but i see a lot of potential here!

[Jojishi]

That loop was super creative. The water effects were cool as well. The main thing you could improve on is the spacing, since it looked a bit shaky (like where the loop was joining the ending/beginning). To make it look smooth, you space consistently so the amount of spacing doesn't change erratically.

Shaky:
|-|------|--|-------|----|------------------|--|-----|

Smooth:
|-|--|----|--------|----------|-------|------|----|--|-|

In the figures above, "|" = frame and "-" = spacing amount.

So as you can see, you've got to be careful it isn't big one frame, super small the next, then ginormous in the frame after. Check through the frames as you animate, make sure it's consistent and apply the appropriate easing in areas when needed. I hope this advice helps.

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