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spooky ghosts [ Jack | 8/3/2018 ]

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My Thread

that's what you get for spitting on their corpse you disgusting fuck
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i suck at battlefield
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shotguns win fistfights
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I had some dramatic intro thingy for this and a more original ending, but that shall be for a later time.
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not really new
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thanks to Gifgiff for a lot of help!
Credits: Blademaster, Lithium, Daniel, Cressel, Droidz, Sharpshooter, Flame, Valtus, Marvilicious, Krustalien, Waffles, Sifter
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Re: Small Combo [Jack's Thread]

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Looks better without the double framing imo. Foot placement is good, it's smooth, seems to be like a pretty solid animation. You should post more though.
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Re: A Couple Things [Jack's Thread]

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I added things.
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Re: A Couple Things [Jack's Thread]

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I like the physic of that two guys get killed, only things that bad is. The fps, the gif raped it. And also the joint with Ichamaru was pretty cool, keep it up man!
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Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

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i shat something out
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Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

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From what I can see, they're still pretty choppy. The blade master one needs to be eased more. You have the rest down imo, just work on easing and flowing your moves together more. A little stiff in some departments as well.
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Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

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ta-daaa!
laziness!
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Re: updoot [Jack's Thread]

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I don't know why laziness turns into a great animation lol, there's nothing much I can critic because it's too short. All you have to do is only fix the hand shakiness and the foot placement, try to check frame to frame and fix the things that doesn't suitable to the orion skin. Otherwise it's nice I like it, keep it up!
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Re: bouncy? no [Jack's Thread]

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I tried a bouncy style.
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Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

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Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

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Looks neat. But try to make the movement bit smoother. Or you can just decrease the fps if it's more appropriate with a lower fps.
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Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

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he goes out of the screen wayyyy too fast the first time
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Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

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Your easing is way off dawg, there pretty much is none.
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Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

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update, ft. arms shakier than a fault line.
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Re: i can't parkour help [Jack's Thread]

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the reaction after he hits it on the floor is all wrong, he wouldn't be able to go back like that with that much momentum going forward
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