Joekulis shindig's that are subpar:Updated 12/28

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Joekulis shindig's that are subpar:Updated 12/28

Postby Joekuli » Mon Dec 26, 2016 1:13 pm

Hi, joekuli old timer before the fall of the .org.

Third animation

60frames 20fps

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second animatino 12/26 110 frames 24fps
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first animation 12/26 59 frames 24fps

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Re: Joekulis shindig's that are subpar

Postby Youngster » Mon Dec 26, 2016 8:05 pm

It's too fast, dood
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Re: Joekulis shindig's that are subpar

Postby Joekuli » Thu Dec 29, 2016 2:47 pm

Thank you for feedback.

60frames 20fps

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:/ imgur keeps speeding up my stuff here's the pivot file for easier viewing.

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Re: Joekulis shindig's that are subpar:Updated 12/28

Postby Madnessthunder » Thu Dec 29, 2016 2:49 pm

It's nice, however the first jump seems really lacking and I get that you tried to portray that but it feels like he jumped and his feet came out from under him like ice rather than he just didnt jump very high.
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Re: Joekulis shindig's that are subpar:Updated 12/28

Postby elixir » Thu Dec 29, 2016 2:51 pm

the camera movement was a nice touch, but it would be even better if the camera was moving the whole time.
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Re: Joekulis shindig's that are subpar:Updated 12/28

Postby MrMushroom » Fri Dec 30, 2016 4:22 am

Climbing looks rly cool. I like it, but jumps are too fast.
I am growing in the forest :P

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